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Gentle Hold On Me
Contributed by
mangos
on
Tuesday, 12th December 2006 @ 06:31:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Really,
No thank you
I must decline
Really,
I promise you
I am just fine
Believe me,
When I tell you
I have no reply
To the questions you pose
The feelings that arose
Are coming to their close
Listen,
I am sorry
I meant you no harm
Listen,
I apologize
Never felt this strong
Hear me,
As I open up to you
Tell you Im lost
Believe me,
When I promise you
I am hopelessly staring
At the wall
In silence
Containing my anger
Deliberating my future
In violence
I am left a stranger
Come closer,
I need to whisper
No one can hear this
Its between you and I
Come closer,
Before you leave
Believe,
This hurts
Me more then you
Breathing dirt
Crisp and burnt
Buttered and churned
Paste to mold
Bend and fold
Flaps of gold
Under words
Which turn
Love into waste
Really,
Im good
Never been better
Really,
Stop asking!
Never felt more alive
Never has there been a sweater taste
____
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Copyright ©
mangos
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2006-12-12 18:31:57]
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Re: Gentle Hold On Me
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 30th January 2007 @ 07:19:43 AM AEST
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I like the flow and it read smoothly.. This was a good poem.. I am surprised no one else has commented.. I liked this.. I especially like the 9th stanza... I can relate to that.. Well done..
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