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Array ( [sid] => 129337 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Gentle Hold On Me [time] => 2006-12-12 18:31:57 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Really,
No thank you
I must decline

Really,
I promise you
I am just fine

Believe me,
When I tell you
I have no reply

To the questions you pose
The feelings that arose
Are coming to their close

Listen,
I am sorry
I meant you no harm

Listen,
I apologize
Never felt this strong

Hear me,
As I open up to you
Tell you I’m lost

Believe me,
When I promise you
I am hopelessly staring

At the wall
In silence
Containing my anger
Deliberating my future
In violence
I am left a stranger

Come closer,
I need to whisper
No one can hear this
Its between you and I

Come closer,
Before you leave

Believe,
This hurts
Me more then you

Breathing dirt
Crisp and burnt
Buttered and churned
Paste to mold
Bend and fold
Flaps of gold
Under words
Which turn
Love into waste

Really,
Im good
Never been better

Really,
Stop asking!
Never felt more alive
Never has there been a sweater taste
____
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Gentle Hold On Me

Contributed by mangos on Tuesday, 12th December 2006 @ 06:31:57 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Really,
No thank you
I must decline

Really,
I promise you
I am just fine

Believe me,
When I tell you
I have no reply

To the questions you pose
The feelings that arose
Are coming to their close

Listen,
I am sorry
I meant you no harm

Listen,
I apologize
Never felt this strong

Hear me,
As I open up to you
Tell you I’m lost

Believe me,
When I promise you
I am hopelessly staring

At the wall
In silence
Containing my anger
Deliberating my future
In violence
I am left a stranger

Come closer,
I need to whisper
No one can hear this
Its between you and I

Come closer,
Before you leave

Believe,
This hurts
Me more then you

Breathing dirt
Crisp and burnt
Buttered and churned
Paste to mold
Bend and fold
Flaps of gold
Under words
Which turn
Love into waste

Really,
Im good
Never been better

Really,
Stop asking!
Never felt more alive
Never has there been a sweater taste
____
__

Copyright Â© mangos ... [ 2006-12-12 18:31:57]
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Re: Gentle Hold On Me (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Tuesday, 30th January 2007 @ 07:19:43 AM AEST
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I like the flow and it read smoothly.. This was a good poem.. I am surprised no one else has commented.. I liked this.. I especially like the 9th stanza... I can relate to that.. Well done..

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