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Array ( [sid] => 12949 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => untitled [time] => 2003-02-19 15:40:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => choking
the tears are unforgiving
screaming,
they're burning the skin
crying
hope is falling out
trying
minimized to a doubt
red streaks
of despair
their branding the skin
wanting to break out
can't help but giving in.

false hope in picture perfect scene
raised eyebrows, its not what it seems
everything they say is a lie
irritating misunderstandings can't deny.
its killing me.

killing
like a thousand knives
pushing
like there's something to be had
staying
maybe things will change
praying
that you'll never be the same
regret, remorse,
its empty hole
waiting patiently
and im dying painfully
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 13 [informant] => maybella [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

untitled

Contributed by maybella on Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 03:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

choking
the tears are unforgiving
screaming,
they're burning the skin
crying
hope is falling out
trying
minimized to a doubt
red streaks
of despair
their branding the skin
wanting to break out
can't help but giving in.

false hope in picture perfect scene
raised eyebrows, its not what it seems
everything they say is a lie
irritating misunderstandings can't deny.
its killing me.

killing
like a thousand knives
pushing
like there's something to be had
staying
maybe things will change
praying
that you'll never be the same
regret, remorse,
its empty hole
waiting patiently
and im dying painfully

Copyright © maybella ... [ 2003-02-19 15:40:00]
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Re: untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 06:06:56 PM AEST
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maybella
I do like your style and ability.
I'm not sure what underlies this poem but there's no doubting how desparately you are suffering.

Re: untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by Percursors on Saturday, 22nd February 2003 @ 02:22:58 AM AEST
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I LOVED IT...u just described the night I had. (xM22)

Re: untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by Maybella on Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 10:21:35 PM AEST
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well I'm glad you liked my lyrics..i just hope your night turned out ok!
-alyssa

Re: untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Tuesday, 25th February 2003 @ 03:55:55 PM AEST
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brilliant...

Re: untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 04:45:16 PM AEST
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your words flow very well. i like your style, too.

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