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How could you?
Contributed by
PreciousKitten
on
Sunday, 17th December 2006 @ 08:16:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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how could you
do all the things you do
when i do as you ask
when it comes to
the little stuff
you don't even
bothered to make a effort on anything
that i say or ask from you.
i fear that this thing
between us will go away
fast and quick
because
if you don't leave then i will
i am suprised
you don't do what other men do to their women
lie, cheat, and act like a king.
yet i still love you for that
because you never do anything like those other men
yet
i feeling unappreciated about the things i do for you
if you love me, then SHOW ME THAT YOU STILL DO!
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PreciousKitten
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2006-12-17 08:16:04]
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Re: How could you?
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 17th December 2006 @ 05:31:35 PM AEST
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aww this is such a sad write.. its unfortunate that your bf can't show you are appreciated .. I know what you mean though .. you just want him to do little things for you or let you know you are appreciated and that is ok.. everyone needs to know they are wanted and needed.. this is a very expressive write though and well put into words .. we all can relate to this at points in our lives.. great job
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