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Array ( [sid] => 129651 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => With This..... [time] => 2006-12-21 10:43:24 [hometext] => a near a dear friend killed herself a long time ago, i wrote this in her memory [bodytext] => With this Gun,
She wanted to end her Life.
Door is Closed,
Music is On,
She is Crying.

With this Letter,
She wanted to say Good-bye.
Nothing is Good for Her,
Pain is Everywhere.

With these tears in my Eyes,
I find her lifeless Body.
The gun is near her Hand,
And I Break Down.

With this Head hung Low,
I tell her Parents what she Did.
They begin to Cry,
Looking at Me,
Asking 'Why?'

With this Broken Heart,
I help carry her Casket.
We set it Down,
To her final resting Place,
And pay final Tribute.

With this Saddened Soul,
I regret not Saving You.
I failed You,
And now...
Now you are Gone.

With this............... [comments] => 3 [counter] => 160 [topic] => 36 [informant] => EddieDean [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

With This.....

Contributed by EddieDean on Thursday, 21st December 2006 @ 10:43:24 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

With this Gun,
She wanted to end her Life.
Door is Closed,
Music is On,
She is Crying.

With this Letter,
She wanted to say Good-bye.
Nothing is Good for Her,
Pain is Everywhere.

With these tears in my Eyes,
I find her lifeless Body.
The gun is near her Hand,
And I Break Down.

With this Head hung Low,
I tell her Parents what she Did.
They begin to Cry,
Looking at Me,
Asking 'Why?'

With this Broken Heart,
I help carry her Casket.
We set it Down,
To her final resting Place,
And pay final Tribute.

With this Saddened Soul,
I regret not Saving You.
I failed You,
And now...
Now you are Gone.

With this...............

Copyright © EddieDean ... [ 2006-12-21 10:43:24]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: With This..... (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Friday, 22nd December 2006 @ 10:15:18 AM AEST
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Sad and powerful... Great poem.. I liked it alot...

Take care
Merry Christmas
Christina

Re: With This..... (User Rating: 1 )
by Jen_unknown_to_myself on Tuesday, 26th December 2006 @ 03:30:28 PM AEST
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It has so much meaning in it. It's also so sad. It's a very moving poem I really liked this poem. Don't blame yourself for not saving her. Once someone decides to kill themselves only themselves can change there minds. Just keep praying for her.

Unknown to myself
Jen

Re: With This..... (User Rating: 1 )
by Kunoichi on Sunday, 18th March 2007 @ 01:08:43 PM AEST
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This poem is oh so very sad. I'm so sorry you weren't able to save her, but like people say, don't blame yourself. You couldn't have known. This poem made me cry cuz one of my friends is almost always depressed and threatening to kill herself. This just made me realize how true those threats can be. Keep up your hopes and remember that she's in a better place now. Great write, keep up the good work. PM me some time, okay?

Kuno = l

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