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Array ( [sid] => 129743 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => [[Picture Perfect]] [time] => 2006-12-24 03:30:09 [hometext] => This is about a couple I saw one time. They seemed so perfect... comments//advice are always welcome for any of my writes! [bodytext] => So perfectly they seem
Together
In the distance
Both so beautiful
Under the stars

As if it were picture perfect
As if they'd come from the sceen of a movie
The music plays to its own beat
As they run around
Holding hands
Smiling
And laughing

Picks her up
In his arms
Carrying her
Spinning around
Kisses her under the stars

So beautiful
The sceen
So perfectly in love
You can tell from a distance

Younge and in love
Laughing and smiling
Picture perfect couple
So deeply in love
You can tell from a distance

It's amazing to see
This perfect couple
Together
It's what a lot of people want
To be deeply in love
Dance around
Kiss in the rain
Hold hands and laugh
Have it seem as if from a movie
Being picked up
And whirled around
Seems so perfect
You can almost hear the music
Its almost surreal [comments] => 3 [counter] => 227 [topic] => 2 [informant] => The_Unknown [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
[[Picture Perfect]]

Contributed by The_Unknown on Sunday, 24th December 2006 @ 03:30:09 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



So perfectly they seem
Together
In the distance
Both so beautiful
Under the stars

As if it were picture perfect
As if they'd come from the sceen of a movie
The music plays to its own beat
As they run around
Holding hands
Smiling
And laughing

Picks her up
In his arms
Carrying her
Spinning around
Kisses her under the stars

So beautiful
The sceen
So perfectly in love
You can tell from a distance

Younge and in love
Laughing and smiling
Picture perfect couple
So deeply in love
You can tell from a distance

It's amazing to see
This perfect couple
Together
It's what a lot of people want
To be deeply in love
Dance around
Kiss in the rain
Hold hands and laugh
Have it seem as if from a movie
Being picked up
And whirled around
Seems so perfect
You can almost hear the music
Its almost surreal




Copyright © The_Unknown ... [ 2006-12-24 03:30:09]
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Re: [[Picture Perfect]] (User Rating: 1 )
by ruthy on Sunday, 24th December 2006 @ 09:31:05 AM AEST
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this is totally brilliant!!!
well done!
I Loved it
happy xmas
ruthy xX


Re: [[Picture Perfect]] (User Rating: 1 )
by MisfitMe on Sunday, 24th December 2006 @ 08:22:44 PM AEST
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I like it, but more than that, I'm thrilled that you're able to see, feel, appreciate & express it through your words. Right on!!!

BigLoveMuchPeace,
~MisfitMe


Re: [[Picture Perfect]] (User Rating: 1 )
by musicXisXlife on Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 01:00:55 AM AEST
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Amazing. I know exactly what youre talking about. Great write. :D




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