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It was nothing at first
Now, it’s blossomed into something lovely
I hope you can take this

Your face was perfectly chiseled by God
You’re a natural wonder in your own right
So beautiful
I don’t dare close my eyes

I’d sing this song for you ten thousand times
Just to keep you by my side
And I’d be happy the rest of my life

I’m not sure I deserve you
But I’ve never been so sure of anything in my life
I know I love you
I know it’s true

I’d sing this song for you ten thousand times
Just to keep you by my side
And I’d be happy the rest of my life
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Our Love

Contributed by idkwhatimdoing5 on Friday, 29th December 2006 @ 01:12:11 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

Our love is like a butterfly
It was nothing at first
Now, it’s blossomed into something lovely
I hope you can take this

Your face was perfectly chiseled by God
You’re a natural wonder in your own right
So beautiful
I don’t dare close my eyes

I’d sing this song for you ten thousand times
Just to keep you by my side
And I’d be happy the rest of my life

I’m not sure I deserve you
But I’ve never been so sure of anything in my life
I know I love you
I know it’s true

I’d sing this song for you ten thousand times
Just to keep you by my side
And I’d be happy the rest of my life

Copyright Â© idkwhatimdoing5 ... [ 2006-12-29 01:12:11]
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Re: Our Love (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 29th December 2006 @ 02:03:15 AM AEST
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You should show it to her tis most lovely.

Michelle

Re: Our Love (User Rating: 1 )
by DrowningHeart on Friday, 29th December 2006 @ 10:24:33 PM AEST
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True love stories never have endings.
Great poem. I must admit I am a little envious.

God bless

Re: Our Love (User Rating: 1 )
by MisfitMe on Saturday, 30th December 2006 @ 03:15:48 PM AEST
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" Awwwwwww...", she manages before swooning.

~Me

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