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Array ( [sid] => 12996 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Human [time] => 2003-02-20 01:20:00 [hometext] => i'm much too human
what else is new? [bodytext] => sick of me yet? will it's just great
i don't have to listen when your words dissipate
you're out over there
spend your voice on me i know it isn't fair
show your face, i won't regret
show your face, i won't forget
show your face, i will expect...
something

i fall down again
oh it's not you
i'm much too human
what else is new?

here we go back for another round
sickening suggestions come inside every sound
at least that's what comes off my end
i'm one sided
leave me be and let me behind
whatever's wrong i'll do just fine
the last thing i look for is a friend
i know i'm lying

i fall down again
oh it's not you
i'm much too human
what else is new?

lost the keys
facing bolted doors
well what is me?
nothing to explore
i know this way
far be it from new
same as yesterday
same as i have to do
found the keys
in front of doors
what is with me?
i don't go forth
i live this way
far off from truth
not this yesterday
not this way
not this yesterday
not this way
not this yesterday
I, DON'T, GO, FORTH, WELL, I

live for any uninteresting belligerant little comatose, i want to wake up outside this mess well i should have known, everything i go for has been a brick up inside my skull, living a lie no wonder each morning feels slow slipped and dull.

lying face to mirror this monster identity takes a grab, of each thought of decency straight thrown to the trash, cash in on worthless works that amounts another dust bowl, now sacrifice it for nothing my heart and mind and soul.

well i try i oughta do what EYE EYE EYE, building more up to all of MY MY MY, EYE and MY puzzled fits in so crookedly out of place, each moment that's all i've had and i live it's disgrace.

i want a change but i don't want the change to change me, sounds a little strange but i've done all these things strangely, no i'm not looking right now for just one particular thing, anything and everything i want to see what it can bring.

i fall down again
oh it's not you
i'm much too human
what else is new?
i fall down again
oh it's not you
i'm much too human
what else is new? [comments] => 3 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 21 [informant] => daniel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
Human

Contributed by daniel on Thursday, 20th February 2003 @ 01:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



sick of me yet? will it's just great
i don't have to listen when your words dissipate
you're out over there
spend your voice on me i know it isn't fair
show your face, i won't regret
show your face, i won't forget
show your face, i will expect...
something

i fall down again
oh it's not you
i'm much too human
what else is new?

here we go back for another round
sickening suggestions come inside every sound
at least that's what comes off my end
i'm one sided
leave me be and let me behind
whatever's wrong i'll do just fine
the last thing i look for is a friend
i know i'm lying

i fall down again
oh it's not you
i'm much too human
what else is new?

lost the keys
facing bolted doors
well what is me?
nothing to explore
i know this way
far be it from new
same as yesterday
same as i have to do
found the keys
in front of doors
what is with me?
i don't go forth
i live this way
far off from truth
not this yesterday
not this way
not this yesterday
not this way
not this yesterday
I, DON'T, GO, FORTH, WELL, I

live for any uninteresting belligerant little comatose, i want to wake up outside this mess well i should have known, everything i go for has been a brick up inside my skull, living a lie no wonder each morning feels slow slipped and dull.

lying face to mirror this monster identity takes a grab, of each thought of decency straight thrown to the trash, cash in on worthless works that amounts another dust bowl, now sacrifice it for nothing my heart and mind and soul.

well i try i oughta do what EYE EYE EYE, building more up to all of MY MY MY, EYE and MY puzzled fits in so crookedly out of place, each moment that's all i've had and i live it's disgrace.

i want a change but i don't want the change to change me, sounds a little strange but i've done all these things strangely, no i'm not looking right now for just one particular thing, anything and everything i want to see what it can bring.

i fall down again
oh it's not you
i'm much too human
what else is new?
i fall down again
oh it's not you
i'm much too human
what else is new?




Copyright © daniel ... [ 2003-02-20 01:20:00]
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Re: Human (User Rating: 1 )
by LadyDama on Thursday, 20th February 2003 @ 08:28:30 AM AEST
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this should be a song... very interesting poetic style... great poem...


Re: Human (User Rating: 1 )
by Dani on Thursday, 20th February 2003 @ 12:14:28 PM AEST
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Wow!!! -- This is awesome!
Honestly, I think it's one of your best and I know writes like this are anything but easy.... so all the more power to you :) *hugs*

~Dani~ :)




Re: Human (User Rating: 1 )
by tease_whizz on Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 03:07:10 PM AEST
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this is brilliant - really interesting style, you express the emotion really well. i've just read my way through all your poetry and i love your vivid, raw style. keep them coming, Kate x




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