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Array ( [sid] => 129975 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Please Have Hope [time] => 2006-12-30 21:27:12 [hometext] => My best freind is well dying they found a tumor in his stomach and some of his major organs are turning black i worry about him soo much!!! [bodytext] => Your giving up hope
Letting your heart wither away
Not crying
Just letting us down.

Please have hope,
For me
For all of your friends
Please have hope.

Seeing you going weak
Seeing you with pain in your eyes
Only makes me wonder if your ok
Please just give me a sign
To let me know your really ok
Because words aren't enough
When you look like that.

Please have hope,
For me
For all of your friends
Please have hope.

[comments] => 4 [counter] => 257 [topic] => 16 [informant] => MandiLee [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )

Please Have Hope

Contributed by MandiLee on Saturday, 30th December 2006 @ 09:27:12 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

Your giving up hope
Letting your heart wither away
Not crying
Just letting us down.

Please have hope,
For me
For all of your friends
Please have hope.

Seeing you going weak
Seeing you with pain in your eyes
Only makes me wonder if your ok
Please just give me a sign
To let me know your really ok
Because words aren't enough
When you look like that.

Please have hope,
For me
For all of your friends
Please have hope.

Copyright © MandiLee ... [ 2006-12-30 21:27:12]
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Re: Please Have Hope (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 30th December 2006 @ 10:09:55 PM AEST
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This is very sad but well written. I'm so sorry that u r going thru this with your friend.
This person must be really sick. Sometimes a person is in so much pain that they rather just go on.
No matter what I hope u hang in there.
luv, huggs, prayer,
emy

Re: Please Have Hope (User Rating: 1 )
by EddieDean on Saturday, 30th December 2006 @ 11:17:18 PM AEST
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Wow, I am truly sorry for you and your friend. I hope that they get better, but, don't keep your hopes up babe. I will pray for your friend and hope they get better, and pray for you too. Its not easy being in your spot, but Im here for you.

Very good work, I liked it.

Love ya!
Mike

Re: Please Have Hope (User Rating: 1 )
by Jen_unknown_to_myself on Sunday, 31st December 2006 @ 12:04:34 AM AEST
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I can feel the sadness u are going through. You and your friend are on my prayer list. Don't give up hope. Have faith.

Great write.

Unknown to myself
Jen

Re: Please Have Hope (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Sunday, 31st December 2006 @ 12:54:20 PM AEST
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Having a parent go through similar...

Sometimes you have to just open to what they are going through and have enough hope for both.

Facing fear with someone who is glowing with hope can make all the difference...So it is imporatnt You remove Your Worry and just send the positive hope from your heart.

Blessings & Healing

Peace
Yangdantien

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