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with the most beautiful girl in your arms you stretch

across strands of ebony and eyes of pearl

you get to gaze into a face unrivaled in all the world

and though i call you friend, brother even, my soul knows you by no other name than theift

so HOO-RAA for you and your joy, but next time you decide to rip out my heart please make it brief

so joy for ya'll and the path of love for which you two now run

but no joy for my path for it soon will end at the barrel of a gun [comments] => 3 [counter] => 589 [topic] => 12 [informant] => Chaser [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 12 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => CongratulatoryPoems )

Congrats?

Contributed by Chaser on Sunday, 31st December 2006 @ 03:18:45 AM in AEST
Topic: CongratulatoryPoems

Congradulations on you wonderous catch

with the most beautiful girl in your arms you stretch

across strands of ebony and eyes of pearl

you get to gaze into a face unrivaled in all the world

and though i call you friend, brother even, my soul knows you by no other name than theift

so HOO-RAA for you and your joy, but next time you decide to rip out my heart please make it brief

so joy for ya'll and the path of love for which you two now run

but no joy for my path for it soon will end at the barrel of a gun

Copyright © Chaser ... [ 2006-12-31 03:18:45]
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Re: Congrats? (User Rating: 1 )
by idkwhatimdoing5 on Sunday, 31st December 2006 @ 04:32:18 AM AEST
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its so sad. you conveyed a powerful feeling. this poem misted my eyes a bit. good job. feel better. ect. :/ (but really, well done)

Re: Congrats? (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Monday, 1st January 2007 @ 02:32:11 PM AEST
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Not fair , is it.But.....Dont dwell what was taken, maybe a blessing in disguise?!?!?! Who knows......Now YOU have a new path for thyself, and BETTER things to come......Know that.,..Well written, yet breaking of ones heart is mean. Trying smiling, it can help.

Happy New Years'

Brew~

Re: Congrats? (User Rating: 1 )
by Drapes on Saturday, 27th January 2007 @ 01:58:55 PM AEST
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Wow. Great word choice. I love how nicely you describe the girl and then turn so bitter toward the end. Very nice, best wishes to you, I'm sorry =( -Drapes

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