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Going further, getting deeper
Temperature rising, temptations growing
And I burn
Feeling as though
I’m going to break down
I’m going to be ripped apart
Unable to face the demon within me
But my heart beats
Sending thoughts of you
Extinguishing the flames
And putting me back together
Giving me the strength
To stand against my demon
And fight it back
So I can continue on
Step by step
For I walk through hell for you
Doing my best
And if I had to
I would walk through again

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For You, I Walk Through Hell

Contributed by Channing on Sunday, 31st December 2006 @ 10:50:43 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Step by step
Going further, getting deeper
Temperature rising, temptations growing
And I burn
Feeling as though
I’m going to break down
I’m going to be ripped apart
Unable to face the demon within me
But my heart beats
Sending thoughts of you
Extinguishing the flames
And putting me back together
Giving me the strength
To stand against my demon
And fight it back
So I can continue on
Step by step
For I walk through hell for you
Doing my best
And if I had to
I would walk through again

-Channing-

Copyright Â© Channing ... [ 2006-12-31 22:50:43]
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Re: For You, I Walk Through Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by DrowningHeart on Monday, 1st January 2007 @ 12:54:57 AM AEST
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I love the feeling of your poem, absolutely wonderful.

D

Re: For You, I Walk Through Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by Alison on Monday, 1st January 2007 @ 01:47:16 AM AEST
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very powerful! great write

Re: For You, I Walk Through Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Monday, 1st January 2007 @ 10:47:02 AM AEST
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nice write...very moving!!

wiz

Re: For You, I Walk Through Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by EddieDean on Monday, 1st January 2007 @ 04:34:12 PM AEST
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A very good write, your dedication to your loved one is great, and you express it very well in this poem. You must be a great person to call a friend, for not many would walk through hell for loved ones.

Good work!

Mike

Re: For You, I Walk Through Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Thursday, 4th January 2007 @ 12:18:50 PM AEST
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Beautiful... This was a very good poem.. I saw the title and I was like I am reading this.. And I am glad that I did... Great poem...

Take care
Christina

Re: For You, I Walk Through Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by GAMEchief on Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 09:46:22 PM AEST
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Very nice. I'm glad you've found someone who means so much to you.

Re: For You, I Walk Through Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by zenith66 on Sunday, 21st January 2007 @ 10:12:23 PM AEST
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Deep stuff, well written and thought provoking,
Keep it up.

Re: For You, I Walk Through Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by Bleedthelove on Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 07:31:26 PM AEST
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I felt the emotion in this piece. I liked it alot. Excellent job.

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