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RED
Contributed by
tonyflew
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Monday, 8th January 2007 @ 07:24:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I burn for you
My mind's ablaze
I'll live for you
'Til the end of days
Heat licks my heart
And roasts my soul
I love the heat
I lose control
At dark I hear it whisper
Its flickering speaks your name
And this hopeless, hapless, moth
Is drawn constant to your flame.
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tonyflew
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2007-01-08 19:24:10]
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Re: RED
(User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on
Monday, 8th January 2007 @ 09:33:29 PM AEST
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Nice flow and meter to this. Loved it.
~Michelle~ |
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Re: RED
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by Drapes on
Monday, 22nd January 2007 @ 03:09:04 PM AEST
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| Very nice. I like the tone and style of this - flows great. Best wishes to you, you're not alone, I know what you're feeling. - Drapes |
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