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Array ( [sid] => 130287 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Thirteen Days [time] => 2007-01-08 23:01:35 [hometext] => After spending my week off during christmas break with a special someone, I had some difficulties coming to terms with emotions I had never had before when I finaly had to go back home, and leave him three hours away. [bodytext] => Thirteen Days
I have never felt so alone
So empty, So lifeless
Now that Im away from you
This room is so cold
This house, this whole city
Empty, Lifeless, A cage
Im sitting in it with no purpose
If my place is at your side
Why am I still here?
Why does this hurt
As if Id lost you?
As if Im dying?
But I already feel dead
You said its not driving home
Its driving nowhere.
Im already nowhere
Everywhere there isnt you
Is nowhere, this isnt home--
No, This doesnt even seem real
Because if I cant fall asleep
If I cant wake up in your arms
I dont know where I am
I am nowhere
If I cant walk a little
To find you there
I am nowhere
I feel so cold, alone
Even if I was surrounded by a thousand
Where are you, Im alone.
Its all completley meaningless
Without you here with me. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 149 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Love_love_kyo [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Thirteen Days

Contributed by Love_love_kyo on Monday, 8th January 2007 @ 11:01:35 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Thirteen Days
I have never felt so alone
So empty, So lifeless
Now that Im away from you
This room is so cold
This house, this whole city
Empty, Lifeless, A cage
Im sitting in it with no purpose
If my place is at your side
Why am I still here?
Why does this hurt
As if Id lost you?
As if Im dying?
But I already feel dead
You said its not driving home
Its driving nowhere.
Im already nowhere
Everywhere there isnt you
Is nowhere, this isnt home--
No, This doesnt even seem real
Because if I cant fall asleep
If I cant wake up in your arms
I dont know where I am
I am nowhere
If I cant walk a little
To find you there
I am nowhere
I feel so cold, alone
Even if I was surrounded by a thousand
Where are you, Im alone.
Its all completley meaningless
Without you here with me.




Copyright © Love_love_kyo ... [ 2007-01-08 23:01:35]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Thirteen Days (User Rating: 1 )
by ButchCorpuz on Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 06:16:27 AM AEST
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Great write! I feel the same way you do. I'm here in Australia and my wife is in the Philippines, we're 6,000 km apart.

Keep writing.

-Butch Corpuz




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