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Sugar, too sweet
I'm drownin' in your eyes
Those seemingly sweet, blue eyes

Sugar, you are beautiful
Sugar, cruel to me
A glorious rose in the dark
Stunning, yet dangerous

Sugar, it's done
Sugar, no more
I've turned sour without you
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Sugar

Contributed by Zajabalaj on Thursday, 11th January 2007 @ 06:04:47 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Sugar, why me?
Sugar, too sweet
I'm drownin' in your eyes
Those seemingly sweet, blue eyes

Sugar, you are beautiful
Sugar, cruel to me
A glorious rose in the dark
Stunning, yet dangerous

Sugar, it's done
Sugar, no more
I've turned sour without you
All things sweet have left me

Copyright © Zajabalaj ... [ 2007-01-11 18:04:47]
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Re: Sugar (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Thursday, 11th January 2007 @ 08:08:57 PM AEST
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this is a really creative write.. i like this piece alot.. I especially love the last stanza awesome job

vampyress Jenni

Re: Sugar (User Rating: 1 )
by Alex23 on Friday, 12th January 2007 @ 01:41:39 AM AEST
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Hey, very neat write. It's simple yet catchy, and I like the mood changes, which show progression. Awesome job!

Re: Sugar (User Rating: 1 )
by Muhammadshanazar on Friday, 12th January 2007 @ 09:01:21 AM AEST
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"All things sweet have left me" a very nice expression, reality is bitter and those who learn to embrace reality taste bitter but then nothing hurt them for they have learnt timly sweetness is nothing more than illusion. A nice piece, take care.
Muhammad Shanazar

Re: Sugar (User Rating: 1 )
by Clarity_Rising on Friday, 12th January 2007 @ 01:41:35 PM AEST
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Very touching and creative. I like your connection between sugar and love. We seem to need both to live. Excellent write!

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