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[aid] => mick
[title] => Waiting to Die...
[time] => 2007-01-16 03:20:12
[hometext] => It blows me away that I used to feel like this... but... on a coffee stained page... tucked away in a dusty folder... on an over crowded shelf... this is what I found...
[bodytext] => When the day comes~
that you find
What once lay ahead~
now lies behind...
And, you can't remember~
when, where or how
Still, what was then~
is no longer now...
And your inability~
to for this account
Is added to the absences~
which seem to mount...
So as the recognized passage~
means little more
Then the lost chances~
to life further explore...
Leaving a sense of mortality~
unknown in youth
And you wonder if this alone~
is the final truth...
So in the final analysis, I guess, I feel qualified in saying to those who might relate,
" This too shall pass..."
BIGLOVEMUCHPEACE
~~~~~~~~~
~~~~~~
~Me
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[score] => 28
[ratings] => 6
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => selfstruggles
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Waiting to Die...
Contributed by
misfitme
on
Tuesday, 16th January 2007 @ 03:20:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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When the day comes~
that you find
What once lay ahead~
now lies behind...
And, you can't remember~
when, where or how
Still, what was then~
is no longer now...
And your inability~
to for this account
Is added to the absences~
which seem to mount...
So as the recognized passage~
means little more
Then the lost chances~
to life further explore...
Leaving a sense of mortality~
unknown in youth
And you wonder if this alone~
is the final truth...
So in the final analysis, I guess, I feel qualified in saying to those who might relate,
" This too shall pass..."
BIGLOVEMUCHPEACE
~~~~~~~~~
~~~~~~
~Me
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2007-01-16 03:20:12]
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Re: Waiting to Die...
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by dougnut on
Tuesday, 16th January 2007 @ 06:25:14 AM AEST
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What an awesome write from the heart.
We cannot help what has happened in the past.
BUT
We can learn how to deal with it.
loved it. KUDOS Top Marks.
Thanks for sharing.
Doug :-)
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Re: Waiting to Die...
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by sadaddy on
Tuesday, 16th January 2007 @ 06:52:51 AM AEST
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Yes the analysis would be correct that all things shall pass such is life that we live. Well done and you continue to write wonderfully.
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Re: Waiting to Die...
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by DrowningHeart on
Tuesday, 16th January 2007 @ 09:53:42 AM AEST
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Flows wonderfully. I can relate....willing to accept and move on.
Blessed Be,
D |
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Re: Waiting to Die...
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 16th January 2007 @ 10:04:41 AM AEST
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Kerry , Isn't it amazing what little treasures can be found. I've done this too much. Write something and find it years later. I look back at my writes from my younger years and I cannot believe where I was. Ahhh yes, time changes things, we grow, we learn.
"this too shall pass" good stuff, sis.
Peace and hugs,
Laura |
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Re: Waiting to Die...
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by yangdantien on
Tuesday, 16th January 2007 @ 01:52:34 PM AEST
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Glad to see this and in turn good to see that it too has passed.
We encounter these bubbles and struggle for a handhold. Some are gifted with words and insights to pop and break the spell.
Bravo & Well Done
Peace
A |
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Re: Waiting to Die...
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 16th January 2007 @ 03:37:25 PM AEST
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My MissyMe hun I can so much relate to what you've written. Yes in the final analysis it did pass. I can always connect to your work in some way or another. You are blessed with the gift of writing my dear friend and you use it well. Glad to have you around sweet Moon Maiden. You glow radiantly always~
love, hugs n prayers,
sue m |
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Re: Waiting to Die...
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by EddieDean on
Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 02:10:44 PM AEST
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Wow, just wow. A powerful and heartfelt write here my friend. The analysis is so very true, "This too shall pass..." With time, pain heals, scars fade and burdens lighten.
Very good work.
mike |
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Re: Waiting to Die...
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by CuriousitysCat on
Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 07:59:22 PM AEST
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Radical, I totally got vibes that said, 'A once future, came to be without me registering it consciously, and then left to exist with other memories in the past.' That was just my take.
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Re: Waiting to Die...
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by Balmain_Tiger on
Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 09:15:17 PM AEST
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You have a way with words to which I can relate.
And yes there is more, more for us to come & more for us to leave behind.
Big hugs
Peter |
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Re: Waiting to Die...
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by shelby on
Friday, 19th January 2007 @ 02:40:45 PM AEST
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Beautiful write Kerry and you are right and this to shall pass
Michelle |
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Re: Waiting to Die...
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by myheartsvoice on
Wednesday, 20th June 2007 @ 12:51:16 AM AEST
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Boy did need this poem i went looking for something like this of yours thank you for
finding it for me by actualy wrriting it and i read it and i hope it shall pass but i don't realy know cause i'm experiencing it first hand. devistatingly true to life and beautiful all in one. omg i just looked at the tittle and that about somes up my life,
Ben |
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