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Waiting, lying bundled, my family in tears

No sign of life, no loving smile or pulse or breath
He has fallen to his death

It hurts me now, almost unreal, I swallow hard
An unearthly feeling of end

Mother sobs mutely into his lifeless chest
Limbs ruined and sprawled

It forces its way from ear to ear
Daddys gone...and the sound of silence is all that i can hear.

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The Sound Of Silence

Contributed by zenith66 on Sunday, 21st January 2007 @ 10:54:59 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Piercing, penetrating my straining ears
Waiting, lying bundled, my family in tears

No sign of life, no loving smile or pulse or breath
He has fallen to his death

It hurts me now, almost unreal, I swallow hard
An unearthly feeling of end

Mother sobs mutely into his lifeless chest
Limbs ruined and sprawled

It forces its way from ear to ear
Daddys gone...and the sound of silence is all that i can hear.

Zenith66

Copyright © zenith66 ... [ 2007-01-21 22:54:59]
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Re: The Sound Of Silence (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Monday, 22nd January 2007 @ 12:20:09 AM AEST
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SORRY IF THIS IS TRUE,BUT IT HAS A CERTAIN KIND OF HEART FEELING TO IT-MEANING I LIKED IT!

DAN!

Re: The Sound Of Silence (User Rating: 1 )
by Dom on Monday, 22nd January 2007 @ 08:09:36 AM AEST
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I haven't read the first entry so I can't say if this is any better, but I will say that I thought this was beautiful and it brought tears to my eyes.

Dom

Re: The Sound Of Silence (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Monday, 22nd January 2007 @ 09:47:58 AM AEST
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wow very powerful write.. I love the imagery on this one.. its like one of those things that are realistic.. awesome job.. thanks for sharing.. very well done

vampyress jenni

Re: The Sound Of Silence (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Monday, 22nd January 2007 @ 04:38:54 PM AEST
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Powerfully emotional....good imagery and rhyme scheme.

Very well done
Larry

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