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Array ( [sid] => 130835 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => 27th [time] => 2007-01-21 23:12:52 [hometext] => i got cheated on with my best frend and i wroght this bot it [bodytext] => 27th
the words you speak are
putting me in my grave
you have made me
so dark
so hollow in side
you said you loved me
but then you betrayed me
why am i dyeing next to you

when i dream
i dream of you
thow your killing me
slayeing me inside
but just want one last kiss
to hold you and feel the bliss
wake me up
i cant hold on
let this be a dream

i knew before the call
that nothing is right at all
and never will be again and now
as I'm braking down
you stand up tall and just
walk away
and i will never see you again
the memory is shatted as I'm diyeing in this
broken glass

when i dream
i dream of you
thow your killing me
slayeing me inside
but just want one last kiss
to hold you and feel the bliss
wake me up i cant hold on
let this be a dream . . .

i picked you up
when you fell down
and now you are rubbing
my face in the ground
when you hit the floor
i was there
throw it all
can some one pick me
up
let this be a dreem [comments] => 1 [counter] => 227 [topic] => 48 [informant] => egg [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

27th

Contributed by egg on Sunday, 21st January 2007 @ 11:12:52 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

27th
the words you speak are
putting me in my grave
you have made me
so dark
so hollow in side
you said you loved me
but then you betrayed me
why am i dyeing next to you

when i dream
i dream of you
thow your killing me
slayeing me inside
but just want one last kiss
to hold you and feel the bliss
wake me up
i cant hold on
let this be a dream

i knew before the call
that nothing is right at all
and never will be again and now
as I'm braking down
you stand up tall and just
walk away
and i will never see you again
the memory is shatted as I'm diyeing in this
broken glass

when i dream
i dream of you
thow your killing me
slayeing me inside
but just want one last kiss
to hold you and feel the bliss
wake me up i cant hold on
let this be a dream . . .

i picked you up
when you fell down
and now you are rubbing
my face in the ground
when you hit the floor
i was there
throw it all
can some one pick me
up
let this be a dreem

Copyright © egg ... [ 2007-01-21 23:12:52]
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Re: 27th (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Tuesday, 30th January 2007 @ 06:48:38 AM AEST
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This was a good poem. I thought you did a great job expressing your hurt feelings.. Being cheated on does make you feel like you are dying... Great poem...

Take care
Christina

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