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Contributed by
Epic
on
Tuesday, 23rd January 2007 @ 12:40:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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To let go
To move on
To show only
What was wrong
Why do I still care?
Still dream?
Still think?
Of you
I grew to love
Grew to hate
Grew in dynamics
So lost in words
I know it
I truly do
It was for the best
For me and you
I was sad
Mad
lost
Depressed
You were stuck
In a home
Not suitable
For a free bird
I did what I did
Now I live with it
I ended it
And now I hurt
I know it
I truly do
It was for the best
For me and you
I still have
The memories
The smiles
The kisses
I want us
To be friends
Not lose touch
From our once
connected hearts
Your someone
Ill always love
No matter what
Because we shared
Our emotions
Now I guess
Its step by step
Breath by breath
And day by day
And maybe
Just maybe
We can share
Another smile someday
Have a conversation
Face to face
Meet each others
New somebodys
And share a laugh
Create new memories
To look back on
Instead of our
Once ended past
Copyright ©
Epic
... [
2007-01-23 00:40:39]
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Re: you
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by ButchCorpuz on
Tuesday, 23rd January 2007 @ 02:02:38 AM AEST
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Wow! Such emotions flow in your poem!
Very good write! Keep it up!
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Re: you
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by UrMyInspiration on
Tuesday, 23rd January 2007 @ 08:35:00 AM AEST
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| So emotional... Very nice! |
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Re: you
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 23rd January 2007 @ 09:49:20 AM AEST
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wow I really like the flow of this and the passion you put into it.. this is a very wise write too.. how people aren't meant to be but share a past.. beautifully written
vampyress JENNI |
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Re: you
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by Drapes on
Saturday, 27th January 2007 @ 02:15:36 PM AEST
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| This made me truly sad, I can very closely relate, very powerful write, nice job - Drapes |
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