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Array ( [sid] => 130936 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Our Secret Thing [time] => 2007-01-24 05:19:47 [hometext] => Plz read and comment, does the title fit well?...open to all ideas gd/bad dnt matter, hope you enjoy :) [bodytext] => Our Secret Thing
I stare at you from across
the courtyard,
our eyes meet,
only to run in opposite
directions
I know you feel it too,
we can't keep hurting,
denying,
lying,
buying the lies
this thing has lasted
a while,
nearing a year
since I said those
lies to your face
if I could, I'd take them back,
every one except the...
I love you
ones, they'll stay forever
true
forever binding me to you
forever reminding me of you
forever tormenting me of

'what could of been'

[Any good guys? plz tell me either way, thanz] [comments] => 3 [counter] => 196 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Devils-confused-daugther [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Our Secret Thing

Contributed by Devils-confused-daugther on Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 05:19:47 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Our Secret Thing
I stare at you from across
the courtyard,
our eyes meet,
only to run in opposite
directions
I know you feel it too,
we can't keep hurting,
denying,
lying,
buying the lies
this thing has lasted
a while,
nearing a year
since I said those
lies to your face
if I could, I'd take them back,
every one except the...
I love you
ones, they'll stay forever
true
forever binding me to you
forever reminding me of you
forever tormenting me of

'what could of been'

[Any good guys? plz tell me either way, thanz]

Copyright © Devils-confused-daugther ... [ 2007-01-24 05:19:47]
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Re: Our Secret Thing (User Rating: 1 )
by Flare_For_Despair on Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 09:35:04 AM AEST
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its understandable and very relatable i think to alot of people. its really good

Re: Our Secret Thing (User Rating: 1 )
by doug on Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 08:12:05 PM AEST
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I liked the feel and the flow of
this poem. I think that is due to
your use of rhyming words placed
back to back in some parts. I think the
title fits well enough as well. Over all
I liked it but the reference to -lies- left
me wondering what happened exactly.
Other than that I thinkit was very good.
Truly , Doug

Re: Our Secret Thing (User Rating: 1 )
by Drapes on Saturday, 27th January 2007 @ 02:16:53 PM AEST
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I do like this, I like the ending and your style, keep writing! -Drapes

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