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My love could not be stronger
Contributed by
Tyler
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Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 08:10:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
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My love could not be stronger,
Then it is when our eyes meet,
When our lips touch,
When I hold you in my arms,
My love, shines brilliant and pure.
Unmatched by the stars,
is the beauty of your smile,
Upon the ground we stand,
feels only the passion our hearts can feel.
Copyright ©
Tyler
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2007-01-24 20:10:37]
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Re: My love could not be stronger
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 08:35:59 PM AEST
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Simple, honest and from your heart, this is just beautiful.
Very well done
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Re: My love could not be stronger
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 08:36:15 PM AEST
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I might sound like broken record player but poetry that comes from the depths of heart and soul are the best kinds this is an inspiration of charm, love, flow and beauty.
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Re: My love could not be stronger
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 09:51:00 PM AEST
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its good..but it sounds unfinished...like there could be somethign more....
at the end you just kind of ...leave off...if you love is strong, prove it! make the poem strong as well...
its beautiful words, but i dont feel it...you know what i'm saying?
good but could be better!
keep it up! |
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Re: My love could not be stronger
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by Bleedthelove on
Thursday, 25th January 2007 @ 11:22:37 AM AEST
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| Simple and sweet. Good job. |
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Re: My love could not be stronger
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 26th January 2007 @ 08:51:13 AM AEST
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short and simple and powerful.. This was a beautiful poem... It reminds me of my boyfriend... Great job..
Take care
Christina |
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