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Well, who are they anyway?

Will they comfort me at night when I am longing for her warmth?

Will they wipe the tears from my distant eyes when I cannot forget her touch?

Will they cut the ties that are tugging on my heart, dragging me towards her?

Oh please, can they dissolve the picture of her beautiful face from my disoriented mind?

They say that if you love someone, let them go...

Well, who are they anyway?

Will they hold my hand and sweep the hair from my face as I am aching from the inside out?

Will they shield my eyes, on those beautiful nights, from the brightest star I am wishing upon?

Will they trace their fingertips up and down my back while they gently kiss my forehead?

Oh please, can they release the pressure that surrounds my broken heart?

They say that if it was meant to be, it will be...

Well, who are they anyway?





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Who Are You?

Contributed by UrMyInspiration on Thursday, 25th January 2007 @ 12:13:26 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



They say that time heals all wounds...

Well, who are they anyway?

Will they comfort me at night when I am longing for her warmth?

Will they wipe the tears from my distant eyes when I cannot forget her touch?

Will they cut the ties that are tugging on my heart, dragging me towards her?

Oh please, can they dissolve the picture of her beautiful face from my disoriented mind?

They say that if you love someone, let them go...

Well, who are they anyway?

Will they hold my hand and sweep the hair from my face as I am aching from the inside out?

Will they shield my eyes, on those beautiful nights, from the brightest star I am wishing upon?

Will they trace their fingertips up and down my back while they gently kiss my forehead?

Oh please, can they release the pressure that surrounds my broken heart?

They say that if it was meant to be, it will be...

Well, who are they anyway?









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Re: Who Are You? (User Rating: 1 )
by Bleedthelove on Thursday, 25th January 2007 @ 12:19:59 AM AEST
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I don't know who they are, but i do know that you write beautifully. Very beautifully.


Re: Who Are You? (User Rating: 1 )
by Malcolmsdreamgirl on Thursday, 25th January 2007 @ 06:36:36 AM AEST
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I would imagine THEY are the ones that have been there in life before you .... and have felt the pain you feel today....

THEY normally have the wisdom and experience which is why they pass it on to us.
We ALL have to experience some distress or pain its what teaches us in life meaning.

Like THEY say ... I say.... It just WASN'T meant to be, and until you allow it to move on ... Time will stand still and so will you ...

Beautiful words written

Good Luck!
Dee x


Re: Who Are You? (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Thursday, 25th January 2007 @ 10:07:29 AM AEST
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wow i love the philosiphical write on this.. I love how this is written.. this is a beatiful piece and soemtimes we have the inner ache until you find the right person.. or sometimes you may think a person you lost is the reason for the ache. however I believe that everything happens for a reason and I do hope that things get better for you soon

take care

vampyress Jenni


Re: Who Are You? (User Rating: 1 )
by Channing on Thursday, 25th January 2007 @ 04:03:52 PM AEST
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Good question...Who are they? Excellent write!

-Channing-


Re: Who Are You? (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Monday, 29th January 2007 @ 05:49:07 PM AEST
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Very nice poem and easy to read. Worry not just follow your heart, it usualy know's better than they do when it come's to love.

thanks also for the comment.


myheartsvoice




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