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Would You?
Contributed by
liindso14
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Sunday, 28th January 2007 @ 12:24:26 AM in AEST
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What would happen if i were to disappear
My voice you would never hear
Would you love me even more if i was gone?
Would you look from dusk til dawn?
Would you be able to handle the anxiety?
Because i cant stand your tranquility
Would you miss my embrace
Then have it disappear without a trace
Did you ever even love me at all?
Around you i always felt so small
Would you miss our stupid fights
Stay up night after night
Would you even care?
I guess my life isnt worth it to spare
If i died would you even care
Would you even say a prayer
So long farewell
Ill see you in hell
My love
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2007-01-28 00:24:26]
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Re: Would You?
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by inlovewithaladd on
Sunday, 28th January 2007 @ 12:32:22 AM AEST
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| I am not a rhymer myself, so it always sounds a little fake to me, though the question here is valid. i do like those last two lines. keep writing! |
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Re: Would You?
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by Drapes on
Sunday, 28th January 2007 @ 04:18:01 PM AEST
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| Oh I love the last few lines! I like the whole thing though, I'd like to ask those questions myself to someone... nice job! -Drapes |
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