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Array ( [sid] => 131156 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Relax, It’s Just The End Of The World [time] => 2007-01-29 23:23:46 [hometext] => [bodytext] => All the traumatized people
Begin to weep and cry
As they watch the fire
Come raining down from the sky
I feel the fear as well
As I stand in disbelief
Yet something does not scare me,
Your hand grasping mine
For we stand together
Watching the flames consume the world
If only people could feel
The way I feel for you
Then fire would be warmth
And not destruction
Everyone would love
Giving perfect satisfaction
However it’s not within human nature
To feel that way toward everyone
Thus we watch as fire
Rains down from the sky
And we shall pass on together
You and I
My only hope is that
We don’t feel the pain and hate
That has ignited the flames,
That we just pass on
With only our love,
So relax my dear
For it’ll be over soon

-Channing- [comments] => 3 [counter] => 232 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Channing [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Relax, It’s Just The End Of The World

Contributed by Channing on Monday, 29th January 2007 @ 11:23:46 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

All the traumatized people
Begin to weep and cry
As they watch the fire
Come raining down from the sky
I feel the fear as well
As I stand in disbelief
Yet something does not scare me,
Your hand grasping mine
For we stand together
Watching the flames consume the world
If only people could feel
The way I feel for you
Then fire would be warmth
And not destruction
Everyone would love
Giving perfect satisfaction
However it’s not within human nature
To feel that way toward everyone
Thus we watch as fire
Rains down from the sky
And we shall pass on together
You and I
My only hope is that
We don’t feel the pain and hate
That has ignited the flames,
That we just pass on
With only our love,
So relax my dear
For it’ll be over soon

-Channing-

Copyright Â© Channing ... [ 2007-01-29 23:23:46]
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Re: Relax, It’s Just The End Of The World (User Rating: 1 )
by SaintzAndSinnerz on Monday, 29th January 2007 @ 11:30:31 PM AEST
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I love the reality of this poem. Keep it up.

Re: Relax, It’s Just The End Of The World (User Rating: 1 )
by trulovaAKAthetruth on Tuesday, 30th January 2007 @ 08:28:36 AM AEST
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I FEEL SO SORRY FOR MY BROTHERS OF THE WORLD. WE ARE ALL LOST IN A SEA
OF LIES AND DECPTIONS NO ONE IS SAFE FROM THE TRUTH.

Re: Relax, It’s Just The End Of The World (User Rating: 1 )
by trulovaAKAthetruth on Tuesday, 30th January 2007 @ 08:28:40 AM AEST
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I FEEL SO SORRY FOR MY BROTHERS OF THE WORLD. WE ARE ALL LOST IN A SEA
OF LIES AND DECPTIONS NO ONE IS SAFE FROM THE TRUTH.

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