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Array ( [sid] => 131194 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => broken out loud [time] => 2007-01-30 21:49:15 [hometext] => please comment [bodytext] => beautifuly broken,
her heart on the floor
as she writes his name,
red lipstick on the door

shes giving it up
and shes letting him go
the feel of his love
is one she will never know

hes holding her back
by holding off goodbye
and then he leaves her waiting
just until the next time

shes done with the tears
this cant be her fate
shes trying so hard
but its herself that she hates

she wants everyone happy
every day and every time
she wants to be a hero
but not the kind that stop crimes

she wants to be the friend
who makes the pain go away
to be the perfect girlfriend
so just maybe he'll stay

she hates herself for what shes not
and what she'll never be
she just cant seem to find the good
she cant see what her friends see

her boyfriends never even around
he lives so far away
she pretends its not a big deal
but it kills her more each day

she'll run until her legs give out
she dosnt know what lifes about
what you give, you get in return
this stupid girl will never learn

she'll cry until the pain has stopped
she'll scream until her heart has dropped
she is everything i would hate to be
this stupid girl is really me [comments] => 7 [counter] => 295 [topic] => 48 [informant] => random_kisses_xoxo [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 32 [ratings] => 7 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
broken out loud

Contributed by random_kisses_xoxo on Tuesday, 30th January 2007 @ 09:49:15 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



beautifuly broken,
her heart on the floor
as she writes his name,
red lipstick on the door

shes giving it up
and shes letting him go
the feel of his love
is one she will never know

hes holding her back
by holding off goodbye
and then he leaves her waiting
just until the next time

shes done with the tears
this cant be her fate
shes trying so hard
but its herself that she hates

she wants everyone happy
every day and every time
she wants to be a hero
but not the kind that stop crimes

she wants to be the friend
who makes the pain go away
to be the perfect girlfriend
so just maybe he'll stay

she hates herself for what shes not
and what she'll never be
she just cant seem to find the good
she cant see what her friends see

her boyfriends never even around
he lives so far away
she pretends its not a big deal
but it kills her more each day

she'll run until her legs give out
she dosnt know what lifes about
what you give, you get in return
this stupid girl will never learn

she'll cry until the pain has stopped
she'll scream until her heart has dropped
she is everything i would hate to be
this stupid girl is really me




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Re: broken out loud (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 30th January 2007 @ 09:56:16 PM AEST
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Heartbreaking write, nice flow and rhyme.

Michelle


Re: broken out loud (User Rating: 1 )
by MisfitMe on Tuesday, 30th January 2007 @ 10:09:51 PM AEST
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I agree w/ my friend, shelby, there...

HEARTBREAKING, ABSOLUTELY HEARTBREAKING !!!

I want to tuck you in & tell you the Big Bad world will go away...& you are all too worthy in so many ways, you need to learn to see...truely!
Nigh~night, sweetheart...

BigLoveMuchPeace
~Misfitme


Re: broken out loud (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Tuesday, 30th January 2007 @ 10:28:45 PM AEST
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Excellent
loved the way this flowed


Re: broken out loud (User Rating: 1 )
by jaded41reason on Tuesday, 30th January 2007 @ 10:46:16 PM AEST
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wow this is really great!!!


Re: broken out loud (User Rating: 1 )
by bluestars on Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 02:11:17 AM AEST
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Wow this is an awesome poem
I can really relate too
Keep up the great writing and thanks for sharing
your talent with us
Best wishes


Re: broken out loud (User Rating: 1 )
by trialnerror on Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 08:41:37 AM AEST
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beautifully written and gets the message accross wonderfully , nice rhymes, smooth flow, loved it!!


Re: broken out loud (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 01:41:05 PM AEST
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beautifully written.. I love the first wording "beautifully broken" this is so heartbreaking but so straight forward and powerful. .I love this write.. splendid

vampyress jenni




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