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Yesterday
Contributed by
MickeyPigKnuckles
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Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 11:05:54 AM in AEST
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" Yesterday "
In the middle of my life I became lonely
in the midst of my loss I'm now blue
the feeling of emptiness surrounds me
I hear my heart screaming for you
You are not mine to love and to cherish
to me you do not belong
your vow of marriage is with another
for me to love you is so wrong
How can I blanket these strong feelings?
Without you my world has no color
the sky is fading under darkness
the moon and stars become duller
I fell for you as my own fool
I have shed all of my pride
I felt rejection when I said I loved you
your feelings for me you denied
Now I shall live in my colorless world
where everything is only black and gray
hoping one day to see your bright smile
remembering when you loved me Yesterday!!!!!
Penned By James L. McHenry
Copyright 2007 James L. McHenry
Copyright 2007 By Mickey Pig Knuckles
Copyright 2007 Mickey Pig Knuckles (All rights reserved)
Copyright 2007 HeartFelt TM
Quote: Life Is Poetry In Motion, Great Poets Reflect Emotion
The Best And Most Beautiful Thing In The World Cant Be Seen Or Touched
It Must Be Felt With Your Heart
Copyright ©
MickeyPigKnuckles
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2007-01-31 11:05:54]
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Re: Yesterday
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 11:10:49 AM AEST
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this is so sad.. sometimes though everything has a reason.. this is a very good expressive write.. I enjoyed reading it
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Re: Yesterday
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 11:12:28 AM AEST
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this is so sad.. sometimes though everything has a reason.. this is a very good expressive write.. I enjoyed reading it
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Re: Yesterday
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 11:23:02 AM AEST
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James,
I felt the lonliness and heartache within your words. May a love come to you to brighten your days and fill your nights with happiness and beauty.
You wrote this very well, flowing and meter very good.
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Yesterday
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 11:24:44 AM AEST
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James,
I felt the lonliness and heartache within your words. May a love come to you to brighten your days and fill your nights with happiness and beauty.
You wrote this very well, flowing and meter very good.
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Yesterday
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by LouisaMontagu on
Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 02:19:48 PM AEST
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My forever gifted and loyal poet, as u say to me, your ink touched the paper, ur words speak my heart. forever reading.
-x- Your friend BBRymz
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Re: Yesterday
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by myheartsvoice on
Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 11:25:14 AM AEST
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Wow, i saw the tittle and liked it thinking it was about yesterday you know, like memory lane type of yesterday so i read it and then i realized what it was saying and the real meaning came true. Quite sad and unsettling
lovely yet very real. sorry for your loss.
myheartsvoice
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