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Array ( [sid] => 131221 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => J [time] => 2007-01-31 14:54:29 [hometext] => Ok, I was young here. I was in seventh grade and someone who I liked left. So I wrote this for him. [bodytext] => You left me lonely
Why did you leave?
My heart is small
And I grew mean

We keep in touch a letter or two
Water separates our holding hands
We had each other for a short time
Who ever knew this would hurt so much

You knew me well
We smiled each day
We kept our secret
What else can I say?

You asked me a question and I answered true
You felt a connection and I thanked you
We almost had a moments kiss
I wanted it so bad but didn’t tell you this

As I try to end this right
I hide my sadness with some delight
We will see each other again
Not today nor tomorrow, but soon
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 308 [topic] => 16 [informant] => europeanprincess [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )

J

Contributed by europeanprincess on Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 02:54:29 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

You left me lonely
Why did you leave?
My heart is small
And I grew mean

We keep in touch a letter or two
Water separates our holding hands
We had each other for a short time
Who ever knew this would hurt so much

You knew me well
We smiled each day
We kept our secret
What else can I say?

You asked me a question and I answered true
You felt a connection and I thanked you
We almost had a moments kiss
I wanted it so bad but didn’t tell you this

As I try to end this right
I hide my sadness with some delight
We will see each other again
Not today nor tomorrow, but soon

Copyright Â© europeanprincess ... [ 2007-01-31 14:54:29]
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Re: J (User Rating: 1 )
by MickeyPigKnuckles on Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 03:19:53 PM AEST
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europeanprincess, the past flames of love will never die or fade as it was a special blessing that was heaven made. Please enjoy the memories and try not to shed a tear because the love once had is forever near. You are so awesome and I can only ask that you may never consider placing your poetic pen down because your reading fans would miss you leaving us all with a sad frown. You are so wonderful.
Mickey Pig Knuckles :)

Re: J (User Rating: 1 )
by trialnerror on Thursday, 8th February 2007 @ 11:27:58 AM AEST
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its unbelievable, it's like i told u what i wanted to say and what i went through and u then wrote these words, amazing. i felt that poem telling my story.
i love it , well done!

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