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As we take step closer to the conclusion with every breath we take
With every tear and every moment of joy the world that we know is decaying into what could have been
The life of nature and how every molecule is perfectly aligned to abide with eachother
Time running as we chase it to seize every moment that makes us humans
In the oceans and on land more and more everyday the heartbeat of existence grows dim
Left and right human relations crumble and we become paranoid of whats to come
The unknown is what we all fear and we all hate to admit will be our downfall
Do we go along for the ride or do we attempt to change what is already sworn to happen
Climbing out of this downward spiral is the only way to save our divinity as souls outlining the plain of destiny
Maybe one day we will all realize the capabilities of the human mind and decide to use it and make a difference in the cycle of life
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The color beneath heaven and hell

Contributed by boredoms_burden on Friday, 2nd February 2007 @ 11:40:47 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

The time of change is every second of the day
As we take step closer to the conclusion with every breath we take
With every tear and every moment of joy the world that we know is decaying into what could have been
The life of nature and how every molecule is perfectly aligned to abide with eachother
Time running as we chase it to seize every moment that makes us humans
In the oceans and on land more and more everyday the heartbeat of existence grows dim
Left and right human relations crumble and we become paranoid of whats to come
The unknown is what we all fear and we all hate to admit will be our downfall
Do we go along for the ride or do we attempt to change what is already sworn to happen
Climbing out of this downward spiral is the only way to save our divinity as souls outlining the plain of destiny
Maybe one day we will all realize the capabilities of the human mind and decide to use it and make a difference in the cycle of life

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Re: The color beneath heaven and hell (User Rating: 1 )
by Bleedthelove on Friday, 2nd February 2007 @ 11:47:14 AM AEST
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Very profound. I like it. Excellent job.

Re: The color beneath heaven and hell (User Rating: 1 )
by MickeyPigKnuckles on Friday, 2nd February 2007 @ 11:53:02 AM AEST
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boredoms_burden, This is an awesome work by you as I really enjoyed the first line which is so true. " The time of change is every second of the day." Wonderful job as I say thanks for sharing your talent of poetic literature and a little of yourself with all of us.
Mickey Pig Knuckles

Re: The color beneath heaven and hell (User Rating: 1 )
by irodethetrain2u on Saturday, 3rd February 2007 @ 11:56:31 PM AEST
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enjoyable read and oh so true.

Re: The color beneath heaven and hell (User Rating: 1 )
by mysterium on Sunday, 4th February 2007 @ 12:32:36 AM AEST
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interesting take on the concept of the life cycle and it reads almost like a story. i think you did a very good job with this one.

Re: The color beneath heaven and hell (User Rating: 1 )
by London_Falls on Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 02:23:56 PM AEST
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i love the poem i especially like the molecule part it really makes you think about how naturally perfect everything is

Re: The color beneath heaven and hell (User Rating: 1 )
by London_Falls on Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 02:23:59 PM AEST
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i love the poem i especially like the molecule part it really makes you think about how naturally perfect everything is

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