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But you didnt
You could have held me
But you wouldnt

You could have stoped me
But you went on
You could have loved me
But now im gone

You could have kiss me
But you turned away
You could have smiled
But you said not today

You could have told me you loved me
But you told me nothing at all
You could have caught my heart
But you let me fall.

Now you ask if I love you?
If I want you forever?
Words I have said to you
So you repeat them, how clever!

You could have stopped me from taking these pills
But you cared more about yourself and what you need
You could have heard my screams
But instead you treated me like a dying breed.

Now I walk all alone
A road that I must stride
How will you feel now?
When you realized that i've died?

Three little words could have saved me
Could have stopped me from what I have to do
Three little words could have kept me alive
But you couldnt even say I LOVE YOU! [comments] => 5 [counter] => 257 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Disenchanted_Poet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

You Could Have Saved Me!

Contributed by Disenchanted_Poet on Sunday, 4th February 2007 @ 11:40:24 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

You could have saved me
But you didnt
You could have held me
But you wouldnt

You could have stoped me
But you went on
You could have loved me
But now im gone

You could have kiss me
But you turned away
You could have smiled
But you said not today

You could have told me you loved me
But you told me nothing at all
You could have caught my heart
But you let me fall.

Now you ask if I love you?
If I want you forever?
Words I have said to you
So you repeat them, how clever!

You could have stopped me from taking these pills
But you cared more about yourself and what you need
You could have heard my screams
But instead you treated me like a dying breed.

Now I walk all alone
A road that I must stride
How will you feel now?
When you realized that i've died?

Three little words could have saved me
Could have stopped me from what I have to do
Three little words could have kept me alive
But you couldnt even say I LOVE YOU!

Copyright © Disenchanted_Poet ... [ 2007-02-04 11:40:24]
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Re: You Could Have Saved Me! (User Rating: 1 )
by MickeyPigKnuckles on Sunday, 4th February 2007 @ 11:47:43 AM AEST
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Disenchanted_Poet, Wow what a powerful poem you have composed here as it reaches out and touches your readers with such emotional powers. We all need to be loved and want to be loved as its a human element of existence. Thank You for sharing a little of yourself and your wonderful gift of poetry with all of us. Wonderful poem.
Mickey Pig Knuckles

Re: You Could Have Saved Me! (User Rating: 1 )
by Kellros on Sunday, 4th February 2007 @ 12:52:16 PM AEST
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Powerful write indeed... the truth remains that people are ( most of the time ) too blind to see what has to be done, said and appreciated. Thus leading to mistakes, don't break yourself over mistakes you never made... You can't make people change, but you can!

Re: You Could Have Saved Me! (User Rating: 1 )
by Bleedthelove on Sunday, 4th February 2007 @ 08:44:01 PM AEST
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I definately agree this is a very powerful poem. I felt the emotion in every line. Its sad how selfish some people are and how careless they can truly be. Dont let those kinda people get the best of you....they arent worth it. Excellent write.

Re: You Could Have Saved Me! (User Rating: 1 )
by jjones12 on Sunday, 4th February 2007 @ 09:44:06 PM AEST
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this is a great poem....i hope that things go your way..you no....for your heart to heal..it takes time...but remember that god is always with you...he's always there for you...so if you ever need anyone to just break down to....talk to god..it helps! by the way you've got great talent!

Re: You Could Have Saved Me! (User Rating: 1 )
by lilblkcat on Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 05:49:39 PM AEST
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An excellent write. I really felt what you were saying. Thanks for sharing it.

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