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Array ( [sid] => 131379 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => never forget [time] => 2007-02-04 21:26:12 [hometext] => please comment [bodytext] => my head is full of yesterday
and thats all thats on my mind
day dreaming of the memories
that wont be left behind

every minute spent with you
will always be remembered
with every little thing you do
the moments are all treasured

you had the guts to take my hand
you took the time to understand
you forgive me for all my dumb mistakes
and now ill do what ever it takes

i remember when i started to cry
and you held me in your arms
for a minute it seemed this horrible place
could no longer cause me harm

and i remember how it used to be
the way that you still look at me
you see the things that no one sees
your heart is now a part of me

your the one who makes life worth living
and your the one who makes my love worth giving
with out you i would still be so alone
an empty shell in a broken home

but most remembered will be
our one final goodbye
the one final kiss
and the tears in my eyes

the necklace i gave you
was just my own little way
of letting you know
that i wish you could stay

ill always remember
ill never forget
the most perfect of times
that we wont soon regret

2-3-07<<---[<3] [comments] => 5 [counter] => 259 [topic] => 24 [informant] => broken_not_beautiful [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 23 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )

never forget

Contributed by broken_not_beautiful on Sunday, 4th February 2007 @ 09:26:12 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

my head is full of yesterday
and thats all thats on my mind
day dreaming of the memories
that wont be left behind

every minute spent with you
will always be remembered
with every little thing you do
the moments are all treasured

you had the guts to take my hand
you took the time to understand
you forgive me for all my dumb mistakes
and now ill do what ever it takes

i remember when i started to cry
and you held me in your arms
for a minute it seemed this horrible place
could no longer cause me harm

and i remember how it used to be
the way that you still look at me
you see the things that no one sees
your heart is now a part of me

your the one who makes life worth living
and your the one who makes my love worth giving
with out you i would still be so alone
an empty shell in a broken home

but most remembered will be
our one final goodbye
the one final kiss
and the tears in my eyes

the necklace i gave you
was just my own little way
of letting you know
that i wish you could stay

ill always remember
ill never forget
the most perfect of times
that we wont soon regret

2-3-07<<---[<3]

Copyright © broken_not_beautiful ... [ 2007-02-04 21:26:12]
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Re: never forget (User Rating: 1 )
by jjones12 on Sunday, 4th February 2007 @ 09:29:44 PM AEST
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this is a great write...very touching...you've got a ton of talent!....keep it up!

Re: never forget (User Rating: 1 )
by Epic on Sunday, 4th February 2007 @ 11:44:10 PM AEST
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beautiful i can relate. passionate write i enjoyed it. keep the good work up.

Re: never forget (User Rating: 1 )
by MickeyPigKnuckles on Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 12:45:19 AM AEST
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broken_not_beautiful, This is a master piece from you as it drips with pure emotion for your readers to grasp and savor. I applaud you for a wonderful heartfelt poem as I take my hat off and bow before you with the hopes that a small part of your glowing talent may rub off onto me as beautiful inspiration. Thank You for giving us such a wonderful piece of poetic literature.
Mickey Pig Knuckles

Re: never forget (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 09:58:16 AM AEST
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a very heartfelt write.. great job in expression I enjoyed reading this

vampyress Jenni

Re: never forget (User Rating: 1 )
by bluestars on Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 03:24:08 PM AEST
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Love this poem because of course
i can relate.
Hope you keep sharing your
poems with the rest of us.
Best wishes

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