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thought he loved me, who is this man?
Why's he smiling? Why do I feel bad inside?
He said,"trust me"
Now I know the truth all men lie

He held me, whispered in my ear
"it's gonna be okay, you know you're safe right here"
Then why do I, feel all I wanna do is die?
Then why do I want to run away and hide?

He looks worried, but I swore I'd never tell
I'll be a good girl, I don't want no one to yell
Can't we be happy? One big happy family?
Oh god what have I done to deserve the things you do to me?

It wasn't my fault, I hope the guilt eats you alive
I had to grow up, way before my time
Sometimes I think to myself,of ways to make you pay
it may be in your past, but it's still in who I am today

It's etched in my skin,it's burned in my mind
do you even remember? Or has it completley slipped your mind?
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abUSED

Contributed by gurlg0newr0ng on Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 08:48:49 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

He touched me, I don't understand
thought he loved me, who is this man?
Why's he smiling? Why do I feel bad inside?
He said,"trust me"
Now I know the truth all men lie

He held me, whispered in my ear
"it's gonna be okay, you know you're safe right here"
Then why do I, feel all I wanna do is die?
Then why do I want to run away and hide?

He looks worried, but I swore I'd never tell
I'll be a good girl, I don't want no one to yell
Can't we be happy? One big happy family?
Oh god what have I done to deserve the things you do to me?

It wasn't my fault, I hope the guilt eats you alive
I had to grow up, way before my time
Sometimes I think to myself,of ways to make you pay
it may be in your past, but it's still in who I am today

It's etched in my skin,it's burned in my mind
do you even remember? Or has it completley slipped your mind?

Copyright © gurlg0newr0ng ... [ 2007-02-05 08:48:49]
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Re: abUSED (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 09:48:22 AM AEST
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this is a very powerful write.. so full of emotional sadness.. No one deserves to be abused.. you didn't deserve that.. don't think that you do.. you were a child.. no one should touch anyone that doesn't want to be .. very powerful write

vampyress Jenni

Re: abUSED (User Rating: 1 )
by MickeyPigKnuckles on Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 10:25:14 AM AEST
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gurlg0newr0ng, What a powerful write you have composed here and this type of evil deed happens a lot to both boys and girls within todays society. Its sad that with all the willing people with no morals that older adults have to rob the innocence from a child and scar them for life both physically, mentally, and emotionally. I hope you know and understand that there are good people still in the world but they are so hard to find now days. Thank You for once again sharing your love of poetry with us all and for giving us a little more of you.
Mickey Pig Knuckles

Re: abUSED (User Rating: 1 )
by untitled on Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 02:53:19 PM AEST
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beautiful. really, people have no idea how many girls have REALLY been abused, I'm glad you didn't get eaten up by the "guilt." Men try to make like it wasn't there fault, saying they have "needs" well their "needs" should come from other girls expenses. AMEN!

Re: abUSED (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Tuesday, 6th February 2007 @ 06:41:22 AM AEST
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This is a very good poem, but sadly I can relate. second last stanza, remember it is not your fault.
take care

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