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Array ( [sid] => 131395 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Wife`s critic [time] => 2007-02-05 09:13:42 [hometext] => i had written lot of love poems, but if i be a critic of my wife, i just thought about it and wrote [bodytext] => Only one life will soon be past
Only what`s done for your wife will last
How often do you ignore your wife?
Isn`t it wise to follow her advise?
Wisdom with you is worthless and empty
Wisdom with your wife is fulfillment and joy
Thank your wife for the variety of her sentiments
There is no better shelter than the shelter of demons
Bless and pray for those who curse and mistreat you
Never forget to do the same with your wife too
Never forget to tell all sacrifices that you do
Fear locks you in but faith frees you
Wife is the only judge who makes all mistakes
To the believer this life is as good as it gets

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The Wife`s critic

Contributed by girish on Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 09:13:42 AM in AEST
Topic: HumorPoetry

Only one life will soon be past
Only what`s done for your wife will last
How often do you ignore your wife?
Isn`t it wise to follow her advise?
Wisdom with you is worthless and empty
Wisdom with your wife is fulfillment and joy
Thank your wife for the variety of her sentiments
There is no better shelter than the shelter of demons
Bless and pray for those who curse and mistreat you
Never forget to do the same with your wife too
Never forget to tell all sacrifices that you do
Fear locks you in but faith frees you
Wife is the only judge who makes all mistakes
To the believer this life is as good as it gets

Copyright © girish ... [ 2007-02-05 09:13:42]
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Re: The Wife`s critic (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Sunday, 1st August 2010 @ 06:40:20 PM AEST
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How true this is . I read this before my wife..she is just laughing and smiling.
Thanks for sharing this lovely poem.:-) venkat

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