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Array ( [sid] => 131466 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Heart On A Platter [time] => 2007-02-06 20:24:09 [hometext] => this is a poem i wrote about 3 years ago yet still can apply to what i feel now ....enjoy feedback would be great!! [bodytext] => You will know my heart only beats for you
The magic I feel was because of you
The heartache you feel I feel with you
And I hope you understand
How lucky I truely am to be with you
I know theres things I should have said
But deep down I know you know
Your the one person who changes me for the better
And if some how you don't know
I feel how love changes one
You show me how good I am
How good I should be
And how good I'm not
You help me grow up
You've helped me let go of the hurt
And showed me true happiness
You never expected me to be a certain way
And you love me
And I know there was someone greater
That placed us into each others arms
Fate would be what you say
You so pure, so true, and so sincere
And the bond I share with you
Is deeper than skin deep
And I hope forever I can share my joy
My tears, my pain, my heart, and my life with you
Now if there was someway I could tell you this
There aren't actions or words to express
For how much I truely love you
Your are my angel
Your are my soul and happiness
My light in the darkness of the night
You are my everything
Words can not express how dear you are to me
My feelings so strong that I know
That I won't do wrong agianst you
I just wanted you to know
What I know and feel everyday! [comments] => 4 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 2 [informant] => heatherslostdreams [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
My Heart On A Platter

Contributed by heatherslostdreams on Tuesday, 6th February 2007 @ 08:24:09 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



You will know my heart only beats for you
The magic I feel was because of you
The heartache you feel I feel with you
And I hope you understand
How lucky I truely am to be with you
I know theres things I should have said
But deep down I know you know
Your the one person who changes me for the better
And if some how you don't know
I feel how love changes one
You show me how good I am
How good I should be
And how good I'm not
You help me grow up
You've helped me let go of the hurt
And showed me true happiness
You never expected me to be a certain way
And you love me
And I know there was someone greater
That placed us into each others arms
Fate would be what you say
You so pure, so true, and so sincere
And the bond I share with you
Is deeper than skin deep
And I hope forever I can share my joy
My tears, my pain, my heart, and my life with you
Now if there was someway I could tell you this
There aren't actions or words to express
For how much I truely love you
Your are my angel
Your are my soul and happiness
My light in the darkness of the night
You are my everything
Words can not express how dear you are to me
My feelings so strong that I know
That I won't do wrong agianst you
I just wanted you to know
What I know and feel everyday!




Copyright © heatherslostdreams ... [ 2007-02-06 20:24:09]
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Re: My Heart On A Platter (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Tuesday, 6th February 2007 @ 09:13:06 PM AEST
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I don't know what happened i was ready to post a comment on this poem and the page just went off so i'm gonna pm my comment to you on this poem. but i'm voting 5stars anyway hope it works.


myheartsvoice


Re: My Heart On A Platter (User Rating: 1 )
by soulsearching43 on Tuesday, 6th February 2007 @ 09:56:33 PM AEST
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great poem
your very lucky to have found someone to inspire you like this


Re: My Heart On A Platter (User Rating: 1 )
by MickeyPigKnuckles on Tuesday, 6th February 2007 @ 11:39:43 PM AEST
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heatherslostdreams, I am really enjoying your awesome poetic talents as I feel some kind of draw almost magnetic as I find myself being somewhat inspired by your fine works of living art. I am thinking it may be due to the emotional content you always inject within each and every composure you produce for your reading fans. You make it obvious that you are a writer of the heart and the words just flow out of you. This particular poem is so meaningfully composed as I can only hope that a small part of you rubs off onto me. Another great poem by heatherslostdreams.
Mickey Pig Knuckles :)


Re: My Heart On A Platter (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 10:24:39 AM AEST
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very well expressed.. this is a deep felt poem.. with alot of raw emotion and straight to the point. good job

vampyress Jenni




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