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Array ( [sid] => 131617 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => you lie [time] => 2007-02-10 17:47:18 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Try and understand
I was compelled
I had no choice
Beyond my control
Were the things I could not change
Was the very thing
That made you run away

Show me compassion
Sympathy in all the right places
Some forgiveness
A change of heart
A second chance
To try again
To fail if we must

How are you doing
Its been such a long time
It only gets lonelier
With each passing day
As you fade
And fade
Until there is no one there

Do you miss me
I miss you
Did you ever love me
Like you said you did

________
____ [comments] => 3 [counter] => 255 [topic] => 43 [informant] => mangos [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 12 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

you lie

Contributed by mangos on Saturday, 10th February 2007 @ 05:47:18 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Try and understand
I was compelled
I had no choice
Beyond my control
Were the things I could not change
Was the very thing
That made you run away

Show me compassion
Sympathy in all the right places
Some forgiveness
A change of heart
A second chance
To try again
To fail if we must

How are you doing
Its been such a long time
It only gets lonelier
With each passing day
As you fade
And fade
Until there is no one there

Do you miss me
I miss you
Did you ever love me
Like you said you did

________
____

Copyright © mangos ... [ 2007-02-10 17:47:18]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: you lie (User Rating: 1 )
by FRANCO on Saturday, 10th February 2007 @ 08:54:38 PM AEST
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The poet has brought out the whisper of a heart's guilt betrayal and regret. Very good indeed.
FRANCO

Re: you lie (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 11th February 2007 @ 08:28:54 PM AEST
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M~ this is incredibly sad .. such longing ..

I think you have captured a sentiment that
many could and do relate to ..

beautifully painful and painfully beautiful ~

~Breezy

Re: you lie (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Friday, 16th March 2007 @ 02:58:14 PM AEST
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Sometimes the only real lie is what we try and feed ourselves... Nothing is achieved through lying, and if a moment of honesty closes a door, then that door was never truly open to begin with. At least being honest with yourself and others doesn't leave you wondering "What if...?" for the rest of your days... That's my opinion anyway. I hope you find your answers once you seek them out.

~Scorp.

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