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Array ( [sid] => 131778 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dejavu [time] => 2007-02-15 18:37:33 [hometext] => Not sure where this comes from...one of those that is just there. [bodytext] => Cumulous cloud formations,
traverse the expansive sapphire-like sky.
A host of God's angels on ready alert,
a lightening bolt will beam them to earth;
brightly reflecting off Alabaster.

A gust of wind tousles our hair,
combed by the spirits present there.
Searching for an explanation,
to life's unique situation,
a mystery of space and time.

In the stillness our Conductor is poised,
a single melodious songbird, the only noise.
Nature's voice vibrates to crescendo;
a magnificent refrain, a tribute to spring.
What an awesome symphony!

Nature's show, a spectacle to behold.
Savor the nostalgic memories that blossom and grow,
A familiarity emerges,
as if we had been there before.
A bewildering sensation unfolds.

Excitement permeates the air,
with an awesome array of associations.
Is this a form of reality renewed?
Perhaps a reincarnation...
certainly an episode of dejavu! [comments] => 5 [counter] => 224 [topic] => 74 [informant] => Willofree [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => surreal )

Dejavu

Contributed by Willofree on Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 06:37:33 PM in AEST
Topic: surreal

Cumulous cloud formations,
traverse the expansive sapphire-like sky.
A host of God's angels on ready alert,
a lightening bolt will beam them to earth;
brightly reflecting off Alabaster.

A gust of wind tousles our hair,
combed by the spirits present there.
Searching for an explanation,
to life's unique situation,
a mystery of space and time.

In the stillness our Conductor is poised,
a single melodious songbird, the only noise.
Nature's voice vibrates to crescendo;
a magnificent refrain, a tribute to spring.
What an awesome symphony!

Nature's show, a spectacle to behold.
Savor the nostalgic memories that blossom and grow,
A familiarity emerges,
as if we had been there before.
A bewildering sensation unfolds.

Excitement permeates the air,
with an awesome array of associations.
Is this a form of reality renewed?
Perhaps a reincarnation...
certainly an episode of dejavu!

Copyright © Willofree ... [ 2007-02-15 18:37:33]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Dejavu (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 10:55:57 PM AEST
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Don't know where it come from either but I luv it!
Awesome!
big huggs,
emy
This write is very magical.

Re: Dejavu (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Saturday, 17th February 2007 @ 01:35:55 AM AEST
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Reading this gives me a somewhat euphoric feeling, and I can't help but think there was a certain elation in penning this piece. I really think this should have been placed under the "Inspirational" topic, but maybe it's just me. Either way, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this Will.

~Scorp.

Re: Dejavu (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 20th February 2007 @ 03:35:45 PM AEST
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I especially like the buildup to the third stanza!
An awsome symphony indeed!

Re: Dejavu (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Wednesday, 28th February 2007 @ 11:57:32 AM AEST
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Gotta love those "just there" writes. I like the playful way you move around the rhyme pattern. The first time it changed up threw me a bit, but then I went back and settled into the words more, focusing less on the way they were woven and more on the imagery. I rather like this one Terry.

Nazzy ~

Re: Dejavu (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 07:11:44 AM AEST
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this is beautiful............

love n' hugs nessa

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