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Array ( [sid] => 13178 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => dreams don’t come true, just becuz’ u want them to [time] => 2003-02-24 01:40:00 [hometext] => Well i don't know what to say
i don't know what to do
i'm so lost and so confused
read my poem i think u'll like it! [bodytext] => Friends come and friends go
life has to bleed to grow
starts off a dream
then gets old
what’s it all mean
everything’s free for a price
dying’s the price u pay for living
faults are the prices u pay for being human
I’ve just lost what I use to believe in
wanting to sob and crawl on my knees
hating my faults
and blaming only me
is what your saying true
I’m mad at u
pretending I’m not
but still feeling betrayed
we signed in blood
what I though we all believed
was I force feeding this upon u
so u just lied to keep yourself alive
making me watch my days go bye
till u finally realize I’m going to leave u behind
but are you sure that’s where u want to be
lost and without me
my eyes are sown shut
can’t bear to look at the light anymore
shameless guilt feelings of no regrets haunting me
my shadow is my own enemy
it’s me
idle hands are at play
aren’t my own
can’t find my way
but I know
yours will play
my feeling are so deep
I wish I could hide them
I wish I was a better lair than I am
wish I could lie to myself about the problems that I don’t have
looking forward to a better day or just an ugly mirror image of me failing
a long ways away
but I won’t make it just trying to fake it
I’m not facing reality right now
it’s scars me so much I want to die
it rips me apart
sells me for spare parts
I like to cry alone
be alone
in the dark
I hate being afraid of the dark
becuz’ I love it so
my alternate reality
I once though was only me
but now I know I’m not alone
and no matter how much u believe
dreams don’t come true just becuz’ u want them to
someone’s already proven that to me
but I still believe
becuz’ only I can brake my life
my dream [comments] => 2 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 6 [informant] => Percursors [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
dreams don’t come true, just becuz’ u want them to

Contributed by Percursors on Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 01:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



Friends come and friends go
life has to bleed to grow
starts off a dream
then gets old
what’s it all mean
everything’s free for a price
dying’s the price u pay for living
faults are the prices u pay for being human
I’ve just lost what I use to believe in
wanting to sob and crawl on my knees
hating my faults
and blaming only me
is what your saying true
I’m mad at u
pretending I’m not
but still feeling betrayed
we signed in blood
what I though we all believed
was I force feeding this upon u
so u just lied to keep yourself alive
making me watch my days go bye
till u finally realize I’m going to leave u behind
but are you sure that’s where u want to be
lost and without me
my eyes are sown shut
can’t bear to look at the light anymore
shameless guilt feelings of no regrets haunting me
my shadow is my own enemy
it’s me
idle hands are at play
aren’t my own
can’t find my way
but I know
yours will play
my feeling are so deep
I wish I could hide them
I wish I was a better lair than I am
wish I could lie to myself about the problems that I don’t have
looking forward to a better day or just an ugly mirror image of me failing
a long ways away
but I won’t make it just trying to fake it
I’m not facing reality right now
it’s scars me so much I want to die
it rips me apart
sells me for spare parts
I like to cry alone
be alone
in the dark
I hate being afraid of the dark
becuz’ I love it so
my alternate reality
I once though was only me
but now I know I’m not alone
and no matter how much u believe
dreams don’t come true just becuz’ u want them to
someone’s already proven that to me
but I still believe
becuz’ only I can brake my life
my dream




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Re: dreams don’t come true, just becuz’ u want them to (User Rating: 1 )
by cryingonmyporch on Sunday, 9th March 2003 @ 01:03:33 AM AEST
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I liked it. It is genuine. It is one of those poems that you have to feel and know where it is from to understand otherwise some people call it rambling. Very nice work hope I Iike your others poem as much as this one! Always
Amy


Re: dreams don’t come true, just becuz’ u want them to (User Rating: 1 )
by Bizzy on Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 05:06:38 PM AEST
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Hi, Percursor, I just commented on Fly Me 2 Saturn--- , so thought I'd read another. This one is good, too. It expresses your confusion, but doesn't conceal the fact that you have alot of insights about life. Great-grandma Bizzy




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