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Sitting here wasting my life secretly wishing for death,
Forever grasping beyond my reach for nothing more then sanity,
Never quite making it always landing upon calamity,

Lying in bed at nightime I cant help but weep,
Silently thoughts run through my head as i try not to sleep,
I dont need you haunting my days as well as all my dreams,
But I cant get away from you or that is how it seems,

Because...

Your like a rose watered with tears,
But as you blossom my beauty dissapears,
Like a weed in the mud Im drenched in sorrow,
Cut by your thorns waiting for a better tommorow,

At school i see you everyday surrounded by all your friends,
But if I tried to say hello you would just pretend,
That people like me simply just dont exist,
The girls with only themselves and the scars upon their wrists,

But I dont know why I even care about what you think or say,
Everything seems so easy for you and I wish my life was that way,
I dont know how you do it all or where to even start,
Being perfect is just way to hard but you seem to easily play the part,

Because...

Your like a rose watered with tears,
But as you blossom my beauty dissapears,
Like a weed in the mud Im drenched in sorrow,
Cut by your thorns waiting for a better tommorow,

Your like a rose watered with tears,
But as you blossom my beauty dissapears,
Like a weed in the mud Im drenched in sorrow,
Cut by your thorns waiting for a better tommorow,
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Roses and weeds

Contributed by -why_not_let_me_live- on Friday, 16th February 2007 @ 06:49:11 AM in AEST
Topic: anguished



Dont waste your time on me cause Im not worth your breath,
Sitting here wasting my life secretly wishing for death,
Forever grasping beyond my reach for nothing more then sanity,
Never quite making it always landing upon calamity,

Lying in bed at nightime I cant help but weep,
Silently thoughts run through my head as i try not to sleep,
I dont need you haunting my days as well as all my dreams,
But I cant get away from you or that is how it seems,

Because...

Your like a rose watered with tears,
But as you blossom my beauty dissapears,
Like a weed in the mud Im drenched in sorrow,
Cut by your thorns waiting for a better tommorow,

At school i see you everyday surrounded by all your friends,
But if I tried to say hello you would just pretend,
That people like me simply just dont exist,
The girls with only themselves and the scars upon their wrists,

But I dont know why I even care about what you think or say,
Everything seems so easy for you and I wish my life was that way,
I dont know how you do it all or where to even start,
Being perfect is just way to hard but you seem to easily play the part,

Because...

Your like a rose watered with tears,
But as you blossom my beauty dissapears,
Like a weed in the mud Im drenched in sorrow,
Cut by your thorns waiting for a better tommorow,

Your like a rose watered with tears,
But as you blossom my beauty dissapears,
Like a weed in the mud Im drenched in sorrow,
Cut by your thorns waiting for a better tommorow,




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Re: Roses and weeds (User Rating: 1 )
by Malcolmsdreamgirl on Friday, 16th February 2007 @ 07:02:12 AM AEST
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This is heavy painful stuff ....

beautifully written infact Perfect!

So you have already started being perfect from what i can see and far more perfect than this person you write of .... besides people that need too many friends are nearly as sad as those that have any....

Well done keep the poetry up
Dee xx


Re: Roses and weeds (User Rating: 1 )
by FRANCO on Friday, 16th February 2007 @ 07:13:58 AM AEST
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Beautifully penned,
My friend, life is not a straight line, the day is not too far when you too will have many friends... see, you have already made a one...
tears make our life more bitter and sore, smile and you see more brighter and sweeter world.
your new found friend,
FRANCO.


Re: Roses and weeds (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Friday, 16th February 2007 @ 07:19:46 AM AEST
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This was beautifully done. I loved this poem. It was deep and powerful... I thought you did a wonderful job expressing how you truely felt.

Take care
Christina-xo


Re: Roses and weeds (User Rating: 1 )
by Bleedthelove on Friday, 16th February 2007 @ 09:26:04 AM AEST
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Very emotional. I felt the pain in this piece. Very beautifully written. Nice job.




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