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Array ( [sid] => 131835 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => untitled [time] => 2007-02-17 08:15:19 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Far past the cayon vistas
and empty fields of endless green
'Neath the skies and ever onward
crawled this slow and vast machine

Who knows by whom this thing was built
or what design it meant to serve
yet in it's stride this juggernaut
seemed intent to ever search

and so with strength , against the wind ,
the massive engine struggled on
until one day , where still it stands ,
it found the end of earth and rock

and 'pon the edge of ocean mist
in endless days of silent fog
it stares out into nothingness
as though in search of something lost
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untitled

Contributed by doug on Saturday, 17th February 2007 @ 08:15:19 AM in AEST
Topic: mystical

Far past the cayon vistas
and empty fields of endless green
'Neath the skies and ever onward
crawled this slow and vast machine

Who knows by whom this thing was built
or what design it meant to serve
yet in it's stride this juggernaut
seemed intent to ever search

and so with strength , against the wind ,
the massive engine struggled on
until one day , where still it stands ,
it found the end of earth and rock

and 'pon the edge of ocean mist
in endless days of silent fog
it stares out into nothingness
as though in search of something lost

Copyright © doug ... [ 2007-02-17 08:15:19]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Saturday, 17th February 2007 @ 08:26:40 AM AEST
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Beautifully put together....deep.

Re: untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by True on Saturday, 17th February 2007 @ 10:00:37 PM AEST
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I really liked this one. It had a beautiful flow to it. I wish you had a title maybe something like "to the ends of the earth". It's not the best of titles, and a title is never as good when it's written by the artist by a title is better than no title at all. Very good write.

Re: untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 17th February 2007 @ 11:06:22 PM AEST
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Very beautifully written.
huggs,
emy

Re: untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 21st March 2007 @ 10:27:13 AM AEST
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I love the way this could be applied to just
about anything and your readers can come
away, each with their own unique pespective of it.

My curiosity has definitely been roused. :)

Great work, doug!

~Breezy

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