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Array ( [sid] => 131836 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Collection Of Words. [time] => 2007-02-17 09:16:05 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I'm taking you inside
My inner dimension
Now pay close attention
As I begin my ascention
Feel the tension
The pain you inflict
But never bother to mention
Evil clings like static
Some kinda sick psycho simatic
Like an addict
A Victim of pain
Tilt my head back
And choke on the rain
Falling from the stars
Just like the memories
Bleeding from my scars
And you might not understand this
But you dont have to
This is just a collection of words
Representing the pain I'm going through
An attempt to try and subdue
This desire I have of dying
A poetic release
Of all the tears I've been crying
Mirror these emotions
Allowing them to reflect
The pain in my heart
This feeling of neglect
I'm a portrait of hurt
Doing my best to explain
How it feels to be treated like dirt
And I guess that's all I really needed to say
Take it for what it's worth
While I lay my head down and fade away. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 220 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Bleedthelove [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
A Collection Of Words.

Contributed by Bleedthelove on Saturday, 17th February 2007 @ 09:16:05 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I'm taking you inside
My inner dimension
Now pay close attention
As I begin my ascention
Feel the tension
The pain you inflict
But never bother to mention
Evil clings like static
Some kinda sick psycho simatic
Like an addict
A Victim of pain
Tilt my head back
And choke on the rain
Falling from the stars
Just like the memories
Bleeding from my scars
And you might not understand this
But you dont have to
This is just a collection of words
Representing the pain I'm going through
An attempt to try and subdue
This desire I have of dying
A poetic release
Of all the tears I've been crying
Mirror these emotions
Allowing them to reflect
The pain in my heart
This feeling of neglect
I'm a portrait of hurt
Doing my best to explain
How it feels to be treated like dirt
And I guess that's all I really needed to say
Take it for what it's worth
While I lay my head down and fade away.




Copyright © Bleedthelove ... [ 2007-02-17 09:16:05]
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Re: A Collection Of Words. (User Rating: 1 )
by Dom on Saturday, 17th February 2007 @ 09:46:08 AM AEST
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Wow this is so vivid and relatable and full of raw emotion. I loved these lines:
"Tilt my head back
And choke on the rain
Falling from the stars
Just like the memories
Bleeding from my scars"
I really hope things get better for you,

Dom


Re: A Collection Of Words. (User Rating: 1 )
by SaintzAndSinnerz on Saturday, 17th February 2007 @ 09:51:36 PM AEST
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This is definately raw emotion.....this poem gave me chills, its so heartbreaking. Your pain pours through these words bleedthelove....please just keep your head high.


Re: A Collection Of Words. (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 17th February 2007 @ 10:48:02 PM AEST
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Incredible writing!
huggs,
emy




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