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[sid] => 131839
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => LEVEL
[time] => 2007-02-17 10:27:46
[hometext] => The notes I have are too big to put here so I will put it at the bottom of the poem. I made this awhile back when I decided to mess with punctuation systems.
[bodytext] => (12)Le repli est fait... (chock) Manifesto de cartel... libel. max,well. citadel... storm,front struc,ture mast) I cat(er THE PROBLEM... HELL, krieg be) the so(a)lut(e)ion to (gins,stain right,rain cesspool surgeon strider: to shine a-new... HEAVEN. Light,force,sword. on rocks bend might-fall... Light,force,sword. in tension grasping a bomb-[i] nation in suspender strap the quickened quakes of rap,ture cap,ture killer catcher adheres the soon.. go,right left,back un,done fun,bad septum silly sacrilege silence in skill. Metamicromegamindwarp measures Mist) the bleak. the weak. the (stakes made in U.S.(.) (21)La bande est coupee... -------------------------------------------------- Notes: -Periods represent not only pauses but number of beats in between phrases. (Rests) -")("=Broken connection of a word. Example: The tre)e is in the trinity of stres(s. Tre)(s. = Tres= three in "Spanish". -Capitalized words are emphasized terms. -Fully capitalized words are extremely emphasized. -Words in "()" are add on phrases or letters that indirectly join with the line while letters that are underlined are the letters taken out so the "()" letters make sense. EX: My train is rea(r)lly late. =My train is early. -"," is like a period except it adds a small pause between usually hyphened terms. Also, the beat of the word is 3 instead of the amount of syllables. EX: Small train= 2 beats Small,train= 3 beats ":" Works like a period except there's more connectivity between the paused terms. -[]=letter add-on -Le repli est fait..: The clinch is made. -La bande est coupee...: The tape is cut. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 73 [informant] => skyhawk432 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => abstract )
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