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Array ( [sid] => 131929 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => 5 Fold [time] => 2007-02-20 18:17:56 [hometext] => [bodytext] => My evidence is little
My expeirence unknown
The world is a creature
& memories are it's bones

I walked a mile in the sun
To the West, late afternoon
Watched the sky and trees
Listen to their tones
Atleast I think I thought,
I heard them speak

Where energy is one
& one is all
& all is gone
Where gone has...

My evolution is strong
Changes are aboard

The moon eclipsed mind
& shallow indention
will turn the spicket
& feed upon the wicked

Lost love, soul
All things heavenly in control

Spice, herbs
Bud

Maybe some one like me,
Deserves

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5 Fold

Contributed by rhei76 on Tuesday, 20th February 2007 @ 06:17:56 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

My evidence is little
My expeirence unknown
The world is a creature
& memories are it's bones

I walked a mile in the sun
To the West, late afternoon
Watched the sky and trees
Listen to their tones
Atleast I think I thought,
I heard them speak

Where energy is one
& one is all
& all is gone
Where gone has...

My evolution is strong
Changes are aboard

The moon eclipsed mind
& shallow indention
will turn the spicket
& feed upon the wicked

Lost love, soul
All things heavenly in control

Spice, herbs
Bud

Maybe some one like me,
Deserves

Copyright © rhei76 ... [ 2007-02-20 18:17:56]
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Re: 5 Fold (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Tuesday, 20th February 2007 @ 06:21:07 PM AEST
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a very great imagery and very creative.. well penned.. awesome write

vampyress jenni

Re: 5 Fold (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Tuesday, 20th February 2007 @ 11:03:43 PM AEST
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This line especially > " I walked a mile in the sun To the West, late afternoon" i loved it. Talk about a flash back. Great writting and pleasantly vivid. You have a good style.

myheartsvoice

Thank you also for the comment.

Re: 5 Fold (User Rating: 1 )
by MickeyPigKnuckles on Tuesday, 20th February 2007 @ 11:26:04 PM AEST
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rhei76, wow what an awesome poem as the journey begins by such a fine author with great ability. The message was great and the composure is perfect. Once again, its so nice to share this brief moment of time with you as its my honor to be amongst your greatness. Thank you so much for feeding our appetite for more of you and your awesome poetic writing.

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Mickey Pig Knuckles

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Re: 5 Fold (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 04:47:12 AM AEST
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I totally enjoyed reading this. I love how it comes across to your reader. Through the magic of your pen you have managed to deliver a spectacular write. Well done.
warm hugs,
sue m

Re: 5 Fold (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 11:16:57 AM AEST
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Another well done piece...I love that last line.

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