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I would love to stab you
Contributed by
little_genna
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Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 02:25:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Not liking who Ive become,
Wishing to be numb.
You make me crazy,
Everything feels so hazy.
Sometimes,
I wish I could rip out,
Your heart and stamp on it.
Break it.
Make you hurt like me,
Do you understand me, yet?
Are we part if a sure bet?
Youre like this darkness inside my heat,
You can make me feel like a dirty little tart.
Your darkness is addictive,
Sometimes its all I can do to live.
Yet it feels like its devouring me,
So please tell me, how this could be?
I would love to stab you,
Give you instant pain,
Make you turn purple and blue.
But there would be nothing to gain.
You are my addiction,
My darkness,
Even sometimes my tormentor.
DP
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Re: I would love to stab you
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by Malcolmsdreamgirl on
Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 02:56:04 PM AEST
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Painful read .... nicely put together tho
Ihope you find peace out there someday
Dee xx |
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Re: I would love to stab you
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 05:20:39 PM AEST
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this has such intense emotions in it.. sounds like you were hurt pretty bad.. sometimes some people aren't good for you.. but i really liked the expression in this piece alot.. great job
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: I would love to stab you
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by unknown_utopia on
Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 07:20:44 PM AEST
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oh I feel ya
I know the pain
well done. |
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Re: I would love to stab you
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by Inevitable on
Thursday, 22nd February 2007 @ 02:14:48 AM AEST
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| sounds like you were mad ***** when you wrote this |
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Re: I would love to stab you
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by little_genna on
Thursday, 22nd February 2007 @ 06:13:29 AM AEST
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line 11 is meant to read
Are we part of a sure bet?
and line 12 is
You�re like this darkness inside my heart,
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Re: I would love to stab you
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by emystar on
Saturday, 12th January 2008 @ 01:39:52 AM AEST
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Well my idea wouldn't be a knife but I do know what these feelings are. I just cut the losses and went on with life.
awesome writing, my friend.
Hang tuff.
big huggs,
emy |
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