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Array ( [sid] => 132033 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Bed Time [time] => 2007-02-23 14:35:51 [hometext] => This one is for my friend, who wouldn't go to sleep [bodytext] => You let out a yawn,
But yet not a snore
This late at night
You can't sleep anymore

The more tired you grew
With each fallen night
When the stars were out
Shining so bright

Please go to bed
You do need your rest
Your making me tired
I'm trying my best

I try not to worry
I try not to scream
I try not to cry
That's how it may seem

Please go to bed
You do need your rest
Your making me tired
I'm trying my best--- [comments] => 3 [counter] => 239 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Smartie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Bed Time

Contributed by Smartie on Friday, 23rd February 2007 @ 02:35:51 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



You let out a yawn,
But yet not a snore
This late at night
You can't sleep anymore

The more tired you grew
With each fallen night
When the stars were out
Shining so bright

Please go to bed
You do need your rest
Your making me tired
I'm trying my best

I try not to worry
I try not to scream
I try not to cry
That's how it may seem

Please go to bed
You do need your rest
Your making me tired
I'm trying my best---




Copyright © Smartie ... [ 2007-02-23 14:35:51]
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Re: Bed Time (User Rating: 1 )
by MickeyPigKnuckles on Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 10:52:06 AM AEST
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Smartie, This was very creative and your flow was smooth with a clear message of delivery. Good Job. Thank you for sharing your gift of poetry and for giving us all a little of yourself.

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Re: Bed Time (User Rating: 1 )
by Smartie on Sunday, 4th March 2007 @ 09:20:22 PM AEST
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awe, thanks so much


Re: Bed Time (User Rating: 1 )
by Demita on Monday, 30th November 2009 @ 01:43:46 AM AEST
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i love this=] it reminds me of me haha
i cant fall asleep before 4am for some reason so im usually always tired




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