Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	27-June 01:20:08 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 132147 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Venus In Blue Jeans . . . Ben [time] => 2007-02-26 13:16:49 [hometext] => An appropriate tittle for a women no less beautiful, than the goddess of love herself. [bodytext] =>

Venus

in blue jeans

is what i saw the

first time i noticed you,

a renaissance painting without

any flaw 'twas celestial deja vu.

Venus

in blue jeans

in front of my eyes

a goddess you were to

me,

forever

you made my

heart realize how

beautiful love

could

be.

What

with your hair

of stardust gold and

your eyes of angelic blue,

a lucid reflection of cosmic

perfection was standing

amidst my

view.

The

warmth

of your love

you bestowed

on me was like

none i've

experienced

before,

your

all that

this mortal

needed to see to

worship forever

more.

Venus

in blue jeans

appeared in the night

stealing my heart away,

making love on the shore by

the old beacon light like the

tide our bodies did

sway.

Clinging

to me as i reach

into you exploring the depths

of your soul, igniting your fire of

female desire pulsating out of

control.

Venus

in blue jeans

caressed my eyes

with her face of divinity,

with

our hearts

entwined forever

defined our place in

eternity.

Ben

the

artist

formerly

known

as

myheartsvoice

[comments] => 10 [counter] => 163 [topic] => 2 [informant] => myheartsvoice [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 34 [ratings] => 7 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Venus In Blue Jeans . . . Ben

Contributed by myheartsvoice on Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 01:16:49 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Venus

in blue jeans

is what i saw the

first time i noticed you,

a renaissance painting without

any flaw 'twas celestial deja vu.

Venus

in blue jeans

in front of my eyes

a goddess you were to

me,

forever

you made my

heart realize how

beautiful love

could

be.

What

with your hair

of stardust gold and

your eyes of angelic blue,

a lucid reflection of cosmic

perfection was standing

amidst my

view.

The

warmth

of your love

you bestowed

on me was like

none i've

experienced

before,

your

all that

this mortal

needed to see to

worship forever

more.

Venus

in blue jeans

appeared in the night

stealing my heart away,

making love on the shore by

the old beacon light like the

tide our bodies did

sway.

Clinging

to me as i reach

into you exploring the depths

of your soul, igniting your fire of

female desire pulsating out of

control.

Venus

in blue jeans

caressed my eyes

with her face of divinity,

with

our hearts

entwined forever

defined our place in

eternity.

Ben

the

artist

formerly

known

as

myheartsvoice

Copyright © myheartsvoice ... [ 2007-02-26 13:16:49]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Venus In Blue Jeans . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 01:37:47 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

As usual, a beautiful dedication

Re: Venus In Blue Jeans . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 01:42:18 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Who ever you are thank you kindly for the vote.

Ben

the

artist

formerly

known

as

myheartsvoice.

Re: Venus In Blue Jeans . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by Dom on Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 02:25:52 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

This is lovely, it has such a wonderful gentle rhythm that makes you sway along with the beauty of the words. I particularly liked the lines:
'What

with your hair

of stardust gold and

your eyes of angelic blue,

a lucid reflection of cosmic

perfection was standing

amidst my

view.'

What a beautiful, ethereal description!

Dom

Re: Venus In Blue Jeans . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by MisfitMe on Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 02:52:24 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Is it your mission to make all of us fall in love w/ your love? 'Cause you're doin' a damn fine job, sweetie. Wow!

BigLoveMuchPeace,
~me

ps "Benny she's really keen"~E.J.

Re: Venus In Blue Jeans . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 04:23:37 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

I like the creative approach you have taken with this write.. its a beautiful devotional write and yet very expressive.. great job

vampyress Jenni

Re: Venus In Blue Jeans . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by one11 on Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 05:28:38 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

you are a true artist.

Re: Venus In Blue Jeans . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 09:47:01 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

My heart should beat in your chest as this beats to the rythm of a lovers tune..as the water beats upon the sandy shores...well done

Re: Venus In Blue Jeans . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 27th February 2007 @ 12:27:29 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Wow ben,
U still got it going on.
Simply beautifull.
huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: Venus In Blue Jeans . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Tuesday, 27th February 2007 @ 01:43:28 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

"with your hair of stardust gold and your eyes of angelic blue, a lucid reflection of cosmic
perfection was standing amidst my view"
What a wonderful painting of an angel!...
a nice dedication.. venkat

Re: Venus In Blue Jeans . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 30th April 2007 @ 06:03:55 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

was there ever a man who had so many loving heartfelt words for the love of his life? oh she must sigh...

love n' hugs nessa

roses

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com