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Upon

that road

of youthfulness

my love she came to

me, amidst a summer

afternoon, somewhere

by the

sea.

so

beautiful

my world became

when she would come to

call,

to

her

i gave

my heart

and name, to me

she gave her

all.

As

soft as

foot prints in

the sand she placed

her hand in

mine,

and

of

my heart

she took comand,

this lady so

devine.

As

the years

went passing by

i love'd her more

and more, even

now i can't

deny,

her beauty i

adore.

You

are my wife

you are my friend

your all my life could be,

your my begining and

my end, your my

eternity.

Ben

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Your My Eternity . . . Ben

Contributed by myheartsvoice on Friday, 2nd March 2007 @ 09:39:19 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Upon

that road

of youthfulness

my love she came to

me, amidst a summer

afternoon, somewhere

by the

sea.

so

beautiful

my world became

when she would come to

call,

to

her

i gave

my heart

and name, to me

she gave her

all.

As

soft as

foot prints in

the sand she placed

her hand in

mine,

and

of

my heart

she took comand,

this lady so

devine.

As

the years

went passing by

i love'd her more

and more, even

now i can't

deny,

her beauty i

adore.

You

are my wife

you are my friend

your all my life could be,

your my begining and

my end, your my

eternity.

Ben

Copyright © myheartsvoice ... [ 2007-03-02 09:39:19]
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Re: Your My Eternity . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by one11 on Friday, 2nd March 2007 @ 10:41:45 AM AEST
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your poems are always so fluid, like you can't help but read it in the way you intended. simple yet well thought and powerful.

Re: Your My Eternity . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by Loriann on Friday, 2nd March 2007 @ 02:29:30 PM AEST
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This was so beautiful. You wife is lucky to have a man who adores her so much. Great job

Loriann

Re: Your My Eternity . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 2nd March 2007 @ 05:31:37 PM AEST
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This is simply precious.
What always draws me in on your luvly poems to your wife is the fact that you show, not tell this incredible luv that is endless.
You are the greatest, my friend!
Big huggs, siles,
emy

Re: Your My Eternity . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 2nd March 2007 @ 07:44:37 PM AEST
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Ben, this is absolutely beautiful. You express yourself so eloquently and with so much emotion. Your wife is very lucky to have someone like you care for her so much.

Your friend,
Marisa

Re: Your My Eternity . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by MisfitMe on Friday, 2nd March 2007 @ 09:23:50 PM AEST
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I hate to be unoriginal, still, somethings deserve reiteration & this is something I've thought to myself several times after one of your writes, so...I'm w/ the 1st to comment on this...

"your poems are always so fluid, like you can't help but read it in the way you intended"

Great job!
BLMP~me

Re: Your My Eternity . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 3rd March 2007 @ 12:47:11 AM AEST
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Your poetry seals the deal in romance and the flow of this is beauitful my friend.

~Michelle~

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