Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	02-June 10:27:10 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 132486 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => exposed [time] => 2007-03-07 21:18:46 [hometext] => [bodytext] => through lace skies, like tears of heaven
the evening showers from above
stream gently down
and come to rest
upon our souls
like liquid love.

my wild bouquet, once close at hand
is bruised, resembling time bygone.
wind blown blossoms
float multi-colored
onto the path
that leads us home.

desire, the web we're tangled in
unspoken thought, threshhold divine.
the you of you
I know so well
feelings linger
illusive and fine.

this gift is all I have to give
a tune to weave a liliac song.
each note cascading
all ways reaching
ever towards a love
for which we long.

it is not cold in our sweet house
though seasons beat upon the door.
for you are here
and warmth for me
and I will ask
for nothing more. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 393 [topic] => 2 [informant] => elle [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

exposed

Contributed by elle on Wednesday, 7th March 2007 @ 09:18:46 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

through lace skies, like tears of heaven
the evening showers from above
stream gently down
and come to rest
upon our souls
like liquid love.

my wild bouquet, once close at hand
is bruised, resembling time bygone.
wind blown blossoms
float multi-colored
onto the path
that leads us home.

desire, the web we're tangled in
unspoken thought, threshhold divine.
the you of you
I know so well
feelings linger
illusive and fine.

this gift is all I have to give
a tune to weave a liliac song.
each note cascading
all ways reaching
ever towards a love
for which we long.

it is not cold in our sweet house
though seasons beat upon the door.
for you are here
and warmth for me
and I will ask
for nothing more.

Copyright © elle ... [ 2007-03-07 21:18:46]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: exposed (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 7th March 2007 @ 09:27:01 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Wow!
This write is heavenly beautifull!
I couldn't squeze out more than five points so I'll just say this write hit the rictor scale all the way up the top.
big huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: exposed (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 8th March 2007 @ 07:27:40 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

elle .. the title is perfect and what follows is so incredibly
sensual and honest. I especially love the last stanza. The
words are beautiful and it floats off the tongue so
gracefully ..

stunning ~

~Breezy

Re: exposed (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 16th December 2008 @ 09:47:44 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

your finest work i have read so far. the imagery is top class. the first stanza is absolutely stellar. a stunning write.

-phil

Re: exposed (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 14th July 2010 @ 11:50:48 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Perfectly awesome. I was right. You can write about anything.

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com