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Array ( [sid] => 13250 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Waiting! [time] => 2003-02-25 00:20:00 [hometext] => About my life waiting patiently! [bodytext] => Waiting for the moment ,waiting for the day,
to tell you of my love,and want you to stay,
Waiting for the hour I can hold you dear,
waiting for you to wipe away the tear,
Waiting patiently is a vertue,
Waiting just to hold you,
I cant take this waiting game no more,
I'ts killing me honey,to the core,
Time doesnt stand still for no man,
That I truly understand,
If only time could stand still,
So I wouldnt wait,but I still will,
Waiting for the day I can see you longer than a week end,
waiting to be with my husband & my best friend! [comments] => 4 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 21 [informant] => lowman613 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Waiting!

Contributed by lowman613 on Tuesday, 25th February 2003 @ 12:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Waiting for the moment ,waiting for the day,
to tell you of my love,and want you to stay,
Waiting for the hour I can hold you dear,
waiting for you to wipe away the tear,
Waiting patiently is a vertue,
Waiting just to hold you,
I cant take this waiting game no more,
I'ts killing me honey,to the core,
Time doesnt stand still for no man,
That I truly understand,
If only time could stand still,
So I wouldnt wait,but I still will,
Waiting for the day I can see you longer than a week end,
waiting to be with my husband & my best friend!

Copyright © lowman613 ... [ 2003-02-25 00:20:00]
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Re: Waiting! (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Tuesday, 25th February 2003 @ 12:38:15 AM AEST
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Oh! virtuous woman! may God fulfill thy best wishes, but never drop a tear drop on earth. it cannot bear the fire of your anguish. venkat

Re: Waiting! (User Rating: 1 )
by Lone_er on Tuesday, 25th February 2003 @ 10:51:59 AM AEST
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Such a moving and beautiful poem maam. I pray that day comes soon for you. --Russ

Re: Waiting! (User Rating: 1 )
by LadyDama on Tuesday, 25th February 2003 @ 01:15:34 PM AEST
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oh... i love this... Christina, you mirror my thoughts of my husband too!!! what are we going to do? ::smile:: wait patiently, because we love them... EXCELLENT poem...

Re: Waiting! (User Rating: 1 )
by spooky on Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 08:36:12 PM AEST
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christina,,we have all the time in the world,,its something that cant be taken away,,we need our partners,,to be with us,,a friend in words,,spooky

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