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Array ( [sid] => 132802 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dismantle Me And Don’t Reassemble [time] => 2007-03-17 13:47:02 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Tear out my eyes
I don’t want to see
As our world closes in on itself
Cut off my ears
I don’t want to hear
As everyone screams their death screams
Snap my vocal chords
I don’t want to speak
My words of regret
Break my legs
I don’t want to walk
Nor continue on through this
Remove my arms
I don’t want to reach
Out to any earthly being
I don’t have the strength
Or the courage to fight anymore
So take my soul
For I don’t want to feel
The suffering that shall ensue,
You made me, now I’m begging,
Break me God,
Please break me

-Channing- [comments] => 3 [counter] => 179 [topic] => 61 [informant] => Channing [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

Dismantle Me And Don’t Reassemble

Contributed by Channing on Saturday, 17th March 2007 @ 01:47:02 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Tear out my eyes
I don’t want to see
As our world closes in on itself
Cut off my ears
I don’t want to hear
As everyone screams their death screams
Snap my vocal chords
I don’t want to speak
My words of regret
Break my legs
I don’t want to walk
Nor continue on through this
Remove my arms
I don’t want to reach
Out to any earthly being
I don’t have the strength
Or the courage to fight anymore
So take my soul
For I don’t want to feel
The suffering that shall ensue,
You made me, now I’m begging,
Break me God,
Please break me

-Channing-

Copyright Â© Channing ... [ 2007-03-17 13:47:02]
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Re: Dismantle Me And Don’t Reassemble (User Rating: 1 )
by Sena on Saturday, 17th March 2007 @ 02:04:24 PM AEST
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I can relate to this...very expressive write. Thx for sharing.

Re: Dismantle Me And Don’t Reassemble (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 17th March 2007 @ 10:31:20 PM AEST
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Good grief, this was gut-wrenching!! Limitless pain
abounds in and between each and every line. Suffering
like this is a horrible way to feel, but you have captured the
emotion of never again wanting to sense another thing
so masterfully. Excellent piece and I hope things become
brighter for you in the future .. (easy to say, I know .. I know)

I feel ya ~

~Breezy

Re: Dismantle Me And Don’t Reassemble (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Wednesday, 4th April 2007 @ 09:56:54 PM AEST
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Very expressive. I liked the title too. Great poem.

Take care
Christina

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