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Array ( [sid] => 133051 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Our Children . . . Joan & Ben Papa [time] => 2007-03-25 14:51:14 [hometext] => My first co-write, i think the tittle speaks for it self and who better than my wife knowing only to well when together we created our children. Now that's one hell of a co write, if ever ther was. [bodytext] =>
I

look

at our children

and see me and you,

what love ever lasting

can realy

do.

I

look

at our daughters

and i'm in awe, once again

love has proven to be without

flaw.

I

look

at our son

and speechless i am,

much

like a shepard who love's his

lamb.

But

little they

are not any more,

laughing and romping

about on the

floor.

Yet

close to our hearts

they still remain,

'tis

there they can come in

from out of the

rain.

Now

once again

there is just

you and i,

loving each other

as time goes

by.

And

yet if my yesterday

i need recall i just look

at our children,

that

say's it

all.

Joan & Ben Papa

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Our Children . . . Joan & Ben Papa

Contributed by myheartsvoice on Sunday, 25th March 2007 @ 02:51:14 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I

look

at our children

and see me and you,

what love ever lasting

can realy

do.

I

look

at our daughters

and i'm in awe, once again

love has proven to be without

flaw.

I

look

at our son

and speechless i am,

much

like a shepard who love's his

lamb.

But

little they

are not any more,

laughing and romping

about on the

floor.

Yet

close to our hearts

they still remain,

'tis

there they can come in

from out of the

rain.

Now

once again

there is just

you and i,

loving each other

as time goes

by.

And

yet if my yesterday

i need recall i just look

at our children,

that

say's it

all.

Joan & Ben Papa

Copyright © myheartsvoice ... [ 2007-03-25 14:51:14]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Our Children . . . Joan & Ben Papa (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 25th March 2007 @ 05:48:58 PM AEST
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Oh Ben my friend,
this is what its all about. Joan you must keep on writing here with Ben, the two of you did great!

Michelle

Re: Our Children . . . Joan & Ben Papa (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Sunday, 25th March 2007 @ 10:53:09 PM AEST
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Absolutely beautiful~
I thoroughly enjoyed this wonderful co-write by you and Joan. It warms the heart and puts a smile on the face. Two loving hearts beating as one. Blessed you both are my dear friend. Thanks so much for sharing this beautiful piece of poetry with us.
much love n hugs to you both,
sue m

Re: Our Children . . . Joan & Ben Papa (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 26th March 2007 @ 12:56:14 AM AEST
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Good work both of you. I really can't tell where one of you begins and the other picks it up. yOU TWO TRULY ARE ONE AND YA'LL PROVED IT IN THIS LUVLY WRITE. oops, my finger slipped.
Joan it's nice to meet you. I'm sure you know that I'm a fan of Bens and now both of you.
I don't know if bens ever told you but I tell him all the time that his great writes to you restores my faith in some men.
You two have a luv that will forever live on.
Awesome work now, more from both of you, please.
Big huggs, much luv, smiles,
emy

Re: Our Children . . . Joan & Ben Papa (User Rating: 1 )
by MisfitMe on Tuesday, 27th March 2007 @ 12:19:14 AM AEST
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Wow, it's soooo cool to meet the muse. You had a lot to live up to, Joan, as evidenced by Bennys prior writes & damn if ya' didn't live up to it all, Lady!

Great job, you two!

BigLoveMuchPeace
~Kerrrylynne

Re: Our Children . . . Joan & Ben Papa (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 25th April 2007 @ 02:54:39 PM AEST
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awww! sweet!!! blessings to you both:)

love n' hugs nessa

roses

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