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Life Is
Contributed by
sadaddy
on
Monday, 26th March 2007 @ 11:28:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I can tell you
That life is
No smooth highway
It can have
Those twists
And turns
It can give
You some lumps
And some bumps
It has so
Many dangers
And detours
Which can be
Made up of construction
And some self destruction
There are no
Short cuts
In life
So why make it harder
Than it has to be
This needs to be clear
Life is
No smooth Highway
So accept some help
That can make it easier
Copyright ©
sadaddy
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2007-03-26 23:28:02]
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Re: Life Is
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by emystar on
Monday, 26th March 2007 @ 11:33:37 PM AEST
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Again, good work, my friend.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Life Is
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by Dom on
Tuesday, 27th March 2007 @ 08:21:03 AM AEST
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This is lovely, the analogy of a road and a journey for life is perfect and the sentiment is so genuine. I really liked this,
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Re: Life Is
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by AirHead on
Tuesday, 27th March 2007 @ 05:14:36 PM AEST
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| Your words are so true |
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Re: Life Is
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by Whisper on
Wednesday, 28th March 2007 @ 12:17:36 PM AEST
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Nice write.
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Re: Life Is
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by yangdantien on
Thursday, 29th March 2007 @ 09:53:18 PM AEST
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This is very good and sweet upon the ears as it delivers a bitter pill to swallow as if reaching to the inner child and reminding them to recognize where they are.
Well Done
Peace
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Re: Life Is
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by needledancing on
Thursday, 12th July 2007 @ 08:14:22 AM AEST
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Wise words. The ability to accept help for some is difficult. They let pride get in their way and they struggle needlessly.
The best time with learning while raising kids was to stop nagging and start asking for help. People love to help each other and all it requires is the humility to ask. Wise and insightful write. |
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