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Array ( [sid] => 133142 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A secret told [time] => 2007-03-29 08:06:25 [hometext] => a SECRET to tell to everyone [bodytext] => One day, I told my friend how much I love you
The next day everyone knew but thou I felt shameful for what became
I didn’t grew fearful for I know that it is true
One hour later, it was recess we sat together in one table
When I starred at you (like always) everyone knew
Then a smile just lit out your face
The bell rang then we were left together
In the hall I knew what you felt because I feel it too
The next week, God foretold what happened she came to me crying
Trying to say bye then kissed me goodbye
I didn’t said anything that was the first time I felt like dying
Like the weight of the world was on me
Like everyone threw me over board then sank the ship
A month later, my friends told me what she said before she ran off
That she loves me more than anyone then said she’s in a hospital
I ran towards her room tripped a hundred times just to get there
Only to know her faith . . .
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A secret told

Contributed by NoboDy_undErsTanDS on Thursday, 29th March 2007 @ 08:06:25 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

One day, I told my friend how much I love you
The next day everyone knew but thou I felt shameful for what became
I didn’t grew fearful for I know that it is true
One hour later, it was recess we sat together in one table
When I starred at you (like always) everyone knew
Then a smile just lit out your face
The bell rang then we were left together
In the hall I knew what you felt because I feel it too
The next week, God foretold what happened she came to me crying
Trying to say bye then kissed me goodbye
I didn’t said anything that was the first time I felt like dying
Like the weight of the world was on me
Like everyone threw me over board then sank the ship
A month later, my friends told me what she said before she ran off
That she loves me more than anyone then said she’s in a hospital
I ran towards her room tripped a hundred times just to get there
Only to know her faith . . .

Copyright Â© NoboDy_undErsTanDS ... [ 2007-03-29 08:06:25]
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Re: A secret told (User Rating: 1 )
by NoboDy_undErsTanDS on Thursday, 29th March 2007 @ 10:08:35 PM AEST
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