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Array ( [sid] => 133199 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Another insult [time] => 2007-03-31 20:57:08 [hometext] => He will never... I will never... it was all a mistake [bodytext] => I feel insulted,
mangelled,
damaged.
You should have just smacked me,
it would have hurt a lot less.

You were supposed to be my friend,
but apparently,
im not even that.

Im tired of trying with you,
I try and do what I think is mature,
and all I get is grief.

Im tired of feeling sad,
alone,
I tried to do what was best,
but maybe the best is just being,
nowhere near you. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 319 [topic] => 48 [informant] => runawaynameless [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 17 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Another insult

Contributed by runawaynameless on Saturday, 31st March 2007 @ 08:57:08 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I feel insulted,
mangelled,
damaged.
You should have just smacked me,
it would have hurt a lot less.

You were supposed to be my friend,
but apparently,
im not even that.

Im tired of trying with you,
I try and do what I think is mature,
and all I get is grief.

Im tired of feeling sad,
alone,
I tried to do what was best,
but maybe the best is just being,
nowhere near you.

Copyright © runawaynameless ... [ 2007-03-31 20:57:08]
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Re: Another insult (User Rating: 1 )
by aloneinthememory on Saturday, 31st March 2007 @ 09:09:56 PM AEST
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Aww Im sorry you're going through this. I hope you get through it okay. Its a very good poem. I like it, it has a lot of meaning.

Fox

Re: Another insult (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Sunday, 1st April 2007 @ 01:03:56 PM AEST
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good write girl, it sux he's a punk when it comes to things that should mean something, I don't know if he ever had morals but I never thought he would treat you like this, the best thing is to stay away from him, and let what goes around,come around. He's already getting a taste of misery, she's such not a woman. love you girl talk to you in a while.

Re: Another insult (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Sunday, 1st April 2007 @ 04:53:03 PM AEST
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I'm so sorry things have turned out like this for you, but chin up girl and don't ever let him get you down. There are plenty of guys out there that would like to date a wonderful person like yourself. I like Rhei believe that what goes around always comes around. He'll get what's coming to him. You should
put him behind you and move on my friend.
I wish you all the best of luck and many brighter days to help heal your wounded heart~
Take care and many *hugs*
sue m

Re: Another insult (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterat_Zool on Monday, 2nd April 2007 @ 09:01:39 PM AEST
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There you go! I like this one a lot better than Internal Quilt. The resigned tone here gives a much stronger message than the anger of that last poem, and its brevity and concision act as strong reinforcers of your disappointment and remorse. Keep it up, this is good stuff, though hopefully sooner rather than later you'll find cause to turn to happier topics.

BZ.

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